| Reviews for The World Only I Know |
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   jordanlink7856 chapter 4 . 3/30/2017 The sudden switches between POV is annoying, and it's a bit confusing when you use both Jake and Corpus at random intervals. |
| frytrix chapter 29 . 9/8/2014 amazing, i have enjoyed reading the story up to almoust 30 chapters. And then you come on chapter 28 and 29. And manage to make me lose completely interest in the story. |
| frytrix chapter 28 . 9/8/2014 this chapter was one big dissapointment. so much for revenge over big mac. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 31 . 12/21/2013 Very awesome chapter excellent job on the writing and prep work. You have outdid yourself on this keep it up bravo. |
| Fallenwolfe chapter 21 . 12/17/2013 Well, it started to seem like a good story. Unfortunately the pointless switching between past and present tense (mid sentence i should add), the inexplicable death note crossover scenes that sound like a fourteen year olds fighting fetish, and the poor transitions between thoughts caused me to quit reading twenty chapters in. It has been a long time since i've given a bad review, but as a fellow author i felt the obligation to say something. |
| DarkLordK chapter 31 . 12/1/2013 It's getting exciting up in here... Hehehe... Wasn't expecting Gleam to be that sneaky. |
| chipmunkfanantic chapter 31 . 11/30/2013 when I read the word 'bambina' I thought of Jake Marshal from the Ace attorney games could Mustang be the pony counterpart to Jake Marshal ? |
| Lupia Wolf chapter 22 . 10/21/2013 *cleans monocle* *sits down on lounge chair* *gets glass of whiskey* *sips said glass of whiskey* and says: "well my good sah, you have made the first good move ah've seen in a while. ah commend you sah. |
| COShepard chapter 12 . 10/5/2013 so now its a crossover of death note... a series I never really watched. Lovely |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 30 . 10/5/2013 Awesome chapter I enjoyed it seems L is being held hostage by this mysterious pony. I wonder who it is more questions for a next chapter keep it up bravo. |
| Webb360 chapter 30 . 9/19/2013 An enjoyable story by far, but I must ask why this isn't a crossover? Light is the crazed, sociopathic, asshole that I hate. I almost fear who the next human is. Will he/she come from a different anime/manga? |
| WolfMaster23 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013 This is surprisingly a very good story so far i wasn't expecting much given the name of the story, but this has a lot of potential to go somewhere. I quite like it. Keep up the good work. |
| Child of nature-Friend of man chapter 17 . 7/10/2013 Dude, good job. I'm lovin it lahk mcdonalds to the point where I actually keep a cut and pasted copy of it on my phone for when I dont have Internet. Keep it up |
| SonicMX chapter 29 . 7/4/2013 One... More... Chapter... Gah! I'm tired... |
| SonicMX chapter 28 . 7/4/2013 Wait... So Big Mac died? But he didn't shout the names... W-WHAT?! |
