Reviews for Roommates
enrimoe chapter 3 . 2/9
there's only one bed
oh my god THERE'S ONLY ONE BED!

this fic is so hilarious and cute.
anyway, Sasuke... he needs to calm his hormones down lol.
wig chapter 3 . 3/1/2019
author: and they were roommates!
me: oh my god they were roommates
Tropicallight chapter 3 . 9/17/2018
That was so much sexual tension between them lol. Great work!
Sakura traducoes chapter 3 . 1/27/2018
Hello, i loved your fanfic, your writing is wonderful, and i wanted to ask for permission to translate it into my language, which in the case is Portuguese, i would give the due credits...i expect an answer, thank you.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2017
The ending was amazing
pluhsauce chapter 3 . 7/27/2017
oh my gosh! I loved this fic so much! The way you write inner VS. outer dialogue is amazing! About to stalk through your other works because this one was so great hehe : )
fanofthisfiction chapter 3 . 1/8/2017
This end really had an 'awe' moment to savor all that they went through. I really loved the build up to the kiss and Sasuke's final proposal. Very, very sweet end to a fun tale.

Personalities came through nicely with the characters in this story, not only with their dialogue, but their actions and thoughts too. The unfiltered commentary of Sai coupled with Naruto's childish ways brought bits of humor to the scenes for sure.

Bringing these two teammates and distanced friends to the next step was not an easy task, but you did it! And it was so fun to watch things develop and progress over the course of the mission.

It took me long enough but I managed to finish all of your fics! I hope 2017 brings some story ideas your way and you have a Happy New Year!
fanofthisfiction chapter 2 . 11/21/2016
Bacon-wrapped Sasuke was awfully cute. And I have to admit, the victory on his first kiss was the highlight of this chapter! Taking us inside Sasuke's worries and fears has us (the reader) squealing and no doubt as you get closer to what we hope will happen, the climax of the story will be all the more sweet. Thanks for sharing!
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
I enjoyed Sasuke's journey to discovering his feelings for Sakura. Being that Sai and Naruto know about them it's been fun watching him squirm with his conflicting thoughts. To doubt that Sakura loves him is the best. Yes, he does deserve to flounder a bit, but it will be fun to see how Sakura deals with him on this mission.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/25/2016
Hehe cute
GallyandBlack chapter 3 . 4/9/2016
Stoooop this was so sweet I teared up!
lunatic.meap chapter 3 . 3/8/2016
AWWWWWW! That ending is just so adorable!
Character is slightly OOC, but dayum, your descriptions are so amazing that i literally had to just stop for a moment to laugh at Sasuke's reaction to everything Sakura does. Haha. Enjoyable read, even if the characters are slightly different.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/16/2016
"One roommate for the rest of his life"
As weird as it is to say this, I was mindblown reading that last sentence because DAYUUUUM I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING SO CUUUUTE I KENNOT OMG ILY FOR WRITING THIS HAHAHAHHAH 3
Guest chapter 3 . 7/15/2015
This is an amazing story! I loved Naruto and Sai! SASUSAKU FOREVER! I don't usually find the stories about Sasuke's struggle :) I LOVE STRONG CAPTAIN SAKURA!
squaredplanet chapter 3 . 6/10/2015
Aw man, that was adorable! I had to snicker every so often cause that was also hilariously great!
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