Stupid Edward. She should make him suffer more

I quite liked this story, especially the echo of New Moon it made Edward's character more like the original, even if he broke Bella's heart in a misguided attempt to help Jasper and not for Bella's own good. I do wish Alice had been Bella's sister and Jane the one who ends up with Jake in the end, I mean I don't like the idea of Alice doing something like that to Jasper.

I don't know if English is not your first language, but some of this makes no sense. Especially Edwards letter?
Pity, as it's a good story; what I can understand of it anyway.

oh no

awwwwwwwwww... such an amazing story!

yes everything worked out specially for Jasper cuz he deserve someone ;)

Awww...Love it

Damn...

oh bella...

I am glad they reunited! I thought Jasper might be good with Jane, I am so glad you included that little tidbit. :)

:):)

every thing will work out as long as he remembers what he has to loose his love for bella wan't allow him to forget

we are blessed to have a love like theirs to come along in our lifetime

awwww... cute story..!

Glad it ended well.

Aw, awesome ending. I loved this story, I think the most out of all your stories.