Hey! Your story sounds good. Can I get a copy?

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Will I be able to find the story again I love this story.

Rereading all your stories and loving every one of them thank you for writing them

Great story!

I think it's going a little fast. Even if bella and Edward have had the hots for one another. I just don't see her going that fast with a kid...I would never move that fast. My kids wouldn't meet the guy for a long time.

random but suddenly the fridge is fully stocked when they just had a convo about how it was basically empty.

Sorry inconsistencies freak me out.

I'm really liking your story so far! Though if I was Bella I'd run away to Vegas now!

The only constructive criticism I can give is the way you have Katie speak makes me cringe. I'm a Speech-Language Pathologist and you've given her a pretty severe speech impediment! Haha, I know you're just trying to get her to speak like a 2-year-old, and sometimes you nail it (like with "wose" for "rose"), but other times it makes no sense. I think the worse ones are "way" for "yay" and "wes" for "yes" (little kids don't do this developmentally) along with "bwear". "Beaw" would make sense since most kids can't produce "r" that young, but adding in a random "w" makes no sense (unless you're trying to give her a ponological disorder..)!

But, I know it's too late now, and this probably doesn't bother anyone else but me! So please don't feel bad! Continue writing and loving life!

Fun ending to a fun story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us! ~Christy

I like that he wants to surprise her with the house of her dreams. That is very sweet. I was adorable that Jasper got both Katie and EJ their own ponies. Cool, Unca Japa! I was hoping for one of each, so I am quite pleased. I always want one of each when twins are involved. I didn't realize I had reached the end of this. I read that pretty fast. Onto the last and final chapter . . .

It was really funny that Esme and Carlisle really couldn't care that Bella and Edward were there, they just wanted their grandkids. They didn't even notice the shirts. Weren't the kids wearing theirs any longer? You would've thought that they would've noticed the kids shirts at the very least. Funny that Esme fainted when she found out all her babies are having babies. I guess Alice and Jasper were trying after all, eh? If the grandparents ever want to have all the kids at once, they are going to need a nanny! Six children all under four . . . at least for now. Goodness.

I loved his excitement. When I was reading his rant on what she 'needs' to do, I was thinking he was about to get yelled at . . . sure enough he did . . . he really stepped in it there. Here I am thinking that she can run the company and he can be the stay at home dad . . . and he is thinking it is the late forties and she needs to stay in bed until the babies come, only to need a nurse, nanny and maid. Shaking my damn head. What is up with the wait staff in Seattle? My brother has run several restaurants over his career and if any one of his employees pulled any minuscule portion of what these people have done at these places, they'd be out the door so fast. Hell, he will write them up if they take the bill with the money and ask, 'would you like change?' . . . he will only tolerate them saying, 'I'll be right back with your change.', to let the customer decide in private and not put them on the spot. I digress again. Whoops! Why are they shopping at IHOP anyway? There has to be a nice little family run breakfast place in Seattle, other than the place that gives you assblast when eating there. Going to hit next to read how the rest of the family likes Rose and Bella's news . . .

GAH! That was fantastic! I knew he would be just thrilled. So wonderful!

I've heard of that happening, getting pregnant even though you are protected with birth control. Interesting that it is twins! Four children under four is going to be rough on Bella. I wonder if it will be Edward staying home with the kids, while Bella runs the business? That would be fun. I'm elated that you had Rose find out at the same time. Wonderful news actually. She really wanted their babies to be close and thought she would take more time to get pregnant. Bella wanted to wait another six months. So, they sped up the process a little. Edward is going to be beyond thrilled. Emmett is going to be tough to get calmed down in the next nine months! How wonderful. I wonder if Alice and Jasper want children . . . it hasn't been mentioned. Maybe they are like me and want to borrow and give back . . . hehehe.

Bella loved her presents. My birthstone is Alexandrite. I have a couple right hand rings with the stones. It is really quite the stone. Depending on the lighting that you are in, it adapts that color. It really is a cool stone. Vegas with those rings, really fun . . . with all the lights and neon. I digress. I liked that reaction from Charlie with his gifts. Then the words from Carlisle to Charlie and how he feels about all of his children. Both very good scenes in this chapter. Esme and her insisting Bella call her mom . . . I loved that.