You are an amazing author. You've managed to capture the emotions of your characters extremely well.
It saddens me really, outstanding stories like this are overshadowed by other stories about more popular characters and ships. I really hope that you continue this, things must be hard on you but I find that the creativity of the mind is a great way to tune that all out.
Assuming you're not bored to death from my unnaturally long review I want to say thank you if you did read it all! Thank you! :)

(Voy a escribir en español porque es demasiado pronto por la mañana y mi cerebro falto de sueño no da para más). Primeramente, odio tus capítulos monstruosos aunque esta vez lo agradezco, no hay mejor forma de llenar hora y media de viaje que con una buena lectura, así que graciasY la verdad es que leerlo ha sido... ¿cómo expresarlo? Intenso es lo más acertado, supongo. Los psicólogos dicen que solemos empatizar más con los sentimientos de aquellos a los que amamos, y yo debo de quererte mucho porque el único motivo por el que no estoy llorando a moco tendido es porque estoy en un tren lleno de gente. Honestamente no estoy muy segura de a qué grupo pertenezco yo, porque sabía que no estabas en tu mejor momento, pero no tenía ni idea de hasta que punto lo estabas pasando mal. Me gustaría creer que, aún de alguna forma extraña y virtual, o con mi visita exprés de hace no mucho, te he ayudado a recuperar la sonrisa. Aún así, y pese a mi incapacidad de mantenerme en contacto diario contigo, sabes que necesites lo que necesites aquí estoy.
Respecto del fic, recuerdo vagamente haber leído algún capítulo (sea en español o inglés) pero hace ya tanto de mis días de Inazuma, que vaya usted a saber. Pero aún con mi despiste y todo, el capítulo me ha encantado. Será por eso de que, en el fondo, soy una ñoña y adoro ver la parte más íntima de los personajes. Te debo mucho más que leerme todos los capítulos del fic (bueno, de este y los otros) por todo lo bueno que has aportado a mi vida, pero empezaré por ahí. Poquito a poco. Y al final terminaré adorando a Handa, verás. Creo que estoy desvariando y ya voy a llegar a la uni, así que... te mando un abrazo muy fuerte

Phew, I'm really late to review this, even though I've already this when you published it but I wanted to give you a proper review.

As always Endou's tendency to give everybody nicknames made me smile a lot. It's so cute! But I really wonder: where does Someoka's nickname come from? Shin-shin or Tora-tora are pretty much clear, since they're based on the character's names but Shu-shu?
At the topic of Someoka: I was always under the impression that Dragon Crush was Someoka's original technique since the episode was about Someoka trying to find his own style... wouldn't it defeat the purpose of that episode if it wasn't?

Your writing style is as clear as always, I haven't spotted any typos at all. But this chapter seems a bit full of dialogue which isn't bad but maybe a bit of description how the characters say their sentences or gestures they use, would make it a bit more dynamic.

But I'm really looking forward to the all the chaos that will come from Kanon's secret plan, that kid doesn't give his Greatgrandpa a breather... I can't wait for the next part to see if the Raimon kids can succeed in their plan of powering up!

Oh gosh why haven't I seen this yet? ;A; Goddammit fanfiction and sending updates to my email.

Anyways...gwaaaaaaa new chapter and it's really cute too! ;U; Honestly I really don't have anything to say uwahhaha I just really really love this and I can't wait for the next chapter. I also really love how perfect your English is, despite it being your second (it's second, right?) language. It's even better than mine ;; u v u

Thank you so much for the update and dedication, I love you, senpai. u v u

Finally I've been able to sit down and get to the review, whew!

So, while that chapter isn't as long as the first two it still manages to bring Handa a whole step further while he stays well in character. He's just too soft but it work out well this time. I liked it how you gave the penguin a personality, I have never thought about that before because these penguins were simply.. there. And weird. But it's Inazuma and I guess it is allowed to be weird.
Handa is not one to lead - so you made him a person that tries to be friends. I like how you think about these details and get the characters' personalities along with the plot! Also, I really like how you write Megane, most writers here exaggerate him. He is not an easy person to deal with (especially in season 1) but he has a whole lot of character development. He knows about his (lack of) abilities but still wants to support his team and this also shows in your fic. Good job!

(I also love how Endou gives people nicknames. He seems like such a nicknames-person but he never uses them in the anime.)

I really like that chapter, keep the good work up!

Have I ever told you how much I love this fic?

Probably not, I'm usually a silent reader.

But I really like how you managed to keep all the characters in character and were able to make a fanfiction out of Handa's inner troubles - usually most fics just pair up random characters and think that it is the only kind of fanfiction that exists.

Keep going! You're writing style is amazing!

Hi senpai. :D
After reading your fics, I feel like mine cannot compare orz. I really like your writing style, and the personification used. Following this one too.
wae-chwan loves yu