Reviews for Nerve Damage
KiroZen chapter 10 . 7/14
I write this review in the hopes of resurrecting the glory that is CrossyCross. Rise to the realm of the living once again, to continue the tale that you have left unfinished.
Aldun chapter 10 . 6/7
Gram?

Wasn't Balmung the sword of Siegfried while Gram the one of Sigurd?
Dr. Valentine chapter 7 . 5/4
Man, after having seen Merlin, Scathach, and Napoleon in FGO, this story became weird.
Abstract Ideas chapter 1 . 1/6
To be entirely fair to most magus, the only reason Shirou's been surviving converting his nerves to magic circuits is because he has Avalon in him. Otherwise he would've been dead a real long time ago.

Basically, Shirou's only this powerful because he has an EX Rank Noble Phantasm in him. And I'd like to remind you that even bloody Excalibur is only A Rank.

Luck. The only thing that's been keeping Shirou alive and powerful, in my opinion.
Lucas Oliveira1 chapter 4 . 12/23/2019
Ah shit bullshit
dejam93 chapter 12 . 12/11/2019
at first I thought this 4 servant thing was forced but you have proved me wrong it is really good and can't wait for the next chapter asks you should put enkidu in
valguienmas chapter 12 . 12/7/2019
The irony in Caesar, besides canon, is that according with DW, Caesar is supposed to be his historical self as a Rider, so yeah, you predicted yet another Servant by quite a margin.

Also, Shishou been a weapon master and a rune caster, both in line with her Assassin and Caster versions respectively, not to mention she uses Gae Bolg as her default weapon. If anything, you should have run a betting circle about incoming Servants.
valguienmas chapter 10 . 12/7/2019
You know what surprised me the most? Hector, canon Hector that's it, is a bit of a mix of yours and Odisseus, laid back and chatty but smart and strong.

And I wish we got this Sigfried instead, way more useful and interesting.

However, I think you abuse a bit too much on Summon NB, but in turn makes up for it for giving them sense to their sources (legends)
valguienmas chapter 9 . 12/6/2019
Red Hare on fire.
Looks at canon Red Hare: very red, uses a lot of fire. He also happens to be kind of Lu Bu as well?

Meh, close enough.
valguienmas chapter 7 . 12/6/2019
You know the interesting part? Many of the OG Servants are current Servants now, or in Moses' case, candidate to be. What I am more impressed with Merlin. Yeah, he is old, but his personality is very in line with his canon self.

Oh, and Medea's Lancer is a sane Lu Bu
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 3 . 12/6/2019
I love that omake. That das way too funny!
NoXVZhuusox chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
Okay, seriously I have been trying to look for that image icon you use for this story and I can't find it anywhere!

May I ask if you manage to save it and still have it?
Guest chapter 9 . 12/1/2019
Do Not Pursue Lu Bu
Mr.Vegerott23 chapter 11 . 11/29/2019
So somebody made a continuation to this fanfic and I my opinion it really sucks, the pace is too fast, it’s full of uninteresting characters, and the focus is all over the place unlike this fanfic.
RainIce chapter 12 . 11/21/2019
I give it my opinion of Super-High Quality, thanks for writing this
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