Reviews for Space-time
Althea Sirius chapter 28 . 5/15/2018
It's getting hard to continue with all the deviation and slow story build up.
Althea Sirius chapter 27 . 5/15/2018
You've deviated somewhat from the actual story. Again, Falcon and Olimar? And how are the next few scenes gonna play out if Fox and Falco don't have their Arwing's?
Althea Sirius chapter 25 . 5/15/2018
Hehehe, Trump. And where are Falcon and Olimar?
Althea Sirius chapter 21 . 5/15/2018
Meta Knight is a stoic character but he really does care.
Althea Sirius chapter 18 . 5/15/2018
How come you had Meta Knight not be able to lift Ike but in the story mode he was able to save Red and Lucas from falling?
Althea Sirius chapter 16 . 5/15/2018
So how is the assault on the Halberd gonna go with Fox and Falco going with DK and Diddy when it was Falcon and Olimar that joined them?
Althea Sirius chapter 15 . 5/12/2018
And the two pilots don't use their scanners, because?
Althea Sirius chapter 14 . 5/12/2018
She could've done a large area scan when she came to the dimension for different life forms.
Althea Sirius chapter 13 . 5/12/2018
Soon we get to see more of the cast!
Althea Sirius chapter 12 . 5/12/2018
I hope you give Peach a chance to fight and show why she's a veteran Smasher.
Althea Sirius chapter 11 . 5/12/2018
I always found their team up to be awesome.
Althea Sirius chapter 10 . 5/12/2018
Some changes are good, some, not so much. But interesting all the same.
Althea Sirius chapter 9 . 5/11/2018
I'm glad you pointed that out. If Yoshi was with Link, he should've been skeptical.
Althea Sirius chapter 8 . 5/11/2018
I see you had to merge two different scenes together. Interesting.
Althea Sirius chapter 7 . 5/11/2018
Looks like he activated his Final Smash. Also, as for Meta Knight, he's not really a villain. You know that, right?
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