Reviews for Space-time |
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Althea Sirius chapter 28 . 5/15/2018 It's getting hard to continue with all the deviation and slow story build up. |
Althea Sirius chapter 27 . 5/15/2018 You've deviated somewhat from the actual story. Again, Falcon and Olimar? And how are the next few scenes gonna play out if Fox and Falco don't have their Arwing's? |
Althea Sirius chapter 25 . 5/15/2018 Hehehe, Trump. And where are Falcon and Olimar? |
Althea Sirius chapter 21 . 5/15/2018 Meta Knight is a stoic character but he really does care. |
Althea Sirius chapter 18 . 5/15/2018 How come you had Meta Knight not be able to lift Ike but in the story mode he was able to save Red and Lucas from falling? |
Althea Sirius chapter 16 . 5/15/2018 So how is the assault on the Halberd gonna go with Fox and Falco going with DK and Diddy when it was Falcon and Olimar that joined them? |
Althea Sirius chapter 15 . 5/12/2018 And the two pilots don't use their scanners, because? |
Althea Sirius chapter 14 . 5/12/2018 She could've done a large area scan when she came to the dimension for different life forms. |
Althea Sirius chapter 13 . 5/12/2018 Soon we get to see more of the cast! |
Althea Sirius chapter 12 . 5/12/2018 I hope you give Peach a chance to fight and show why she's a veteran Smasher. |
Althea Sirius chapter 11 . 5/12/2018 I always found their team up to be awesome. |
Althea Sirius chapter 10 . 5/12/2018 Some changes are good, some, not so much. But interesting all the same. |
Althea Sirius chapter 9 . 5/11/2018 I'm glad you pointed that out. If Yoshi was with Link, he should've been skeptical. |
Althea Sirius chapter 8 . 5/11/2018 I see you had to merge two different scenes together. Interesting. |
Althea Sirius chapter 7 . 5/11/2018 Looks like he activated his Final Smash. Also, as for Meta Knight, he's not really a villain. You know that, right? |