Did you ever think about making a sequel on this story? Good job by the way.

You tried hard with it, and succeeded. Very well written, I enjoy your writing. Great job. I hope you write more stories of him. He is my absolute favorite character. Thanks for sharing.

In all honesty, it was ok. I was really disappointed with the ending. The beginning on the crash and Yami's injuries were SO detailed, and then, towards the end, everything went by so quickly :( It would have been amazing to have a detailed account on him waking up, the process of it all, him thinking about what happened on the train, feeling guilty and as though he deserved it, etc.

The first half of this fic showed off a lot of your skills. I thoroughly enjoyed it and it's why I'm adding this fic to my favorites. I really wish I could say the exact same for the second half /

(Also, in the paragraph that starts with "Ironheart sat on a stool...", you use the name/title "the Pharaoh" so much, it's...well, you used it a lot. A variety in pronouns for him would have made that part smoother to read.)

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love your stories! :3

I did like it! It was a pleasant break from VS, and from all the mediocre fics I've been seeing a surplus of lately... I wonder why... Good job!

Woah! Intense story. Xd it was great. I loved it!
The crash sounded bad. A normal person would die! Xd I really liked! Awesome :)

Of course the story is great.