Reviews for Foray
SilverNova chapter 12 . 9/1
It’s been four years, dude, what gives? Also, I have been getting pretty bored with the lack of action in the last few chapters. May I suggest an Eggman attack, or Sonic getting injured, or something interesting like that? I apologize if I am coming across as rude, but I really love this story, and I want to see it continued, but with some more excitement and cliffhangers.
Avril the Glitch chapter 12 . 6/30
y'know, if i was a sibling of them, I would be even more rude. I would be like," Shut up, i am not taking any responsibilitys here for so many reasons and I would be glad to share them. Mother or not your just a mobian. Mobian is mobian. Higj class or not we're still the same species. 1) I hate formalities 2) it will make me more insane every single day if i get trapped in the castle and im sure you would not want your daughther getting sentance to death would you? 3) i hate responsibilitys. 4)I will never do chores. 5) I can shout whenever I want to. 6) I will beat the crap out of you if I you make me do something i hate doing. 7) i dont wanna wear royal crowns or dress. I hate dresses and Royal clothing are like your wearing something as if your an old lady. 8) Youfr holding me back. 9)Im going back whether you like it or not.10) yout selfish. 11) you dont control me. 12)There is a saying that you have to live life the fullest but getting trapped in a castle and just giving orders is not living life to the fullest. Yeah i know im a savage beast.
smlash chapter 12 . 3/27
It's been a few months over 3 years since you've last updated, but I really enjoyed this fanfiction. I hope this gets updated again one day in the future.
you shall not know my name chapter 3 . 3/16
I love the interaction between sonic and tails; it's so sweet!
But could you maybe fix the spelling in all your chapters? It's just that you keep spelling 'kit' with a 't' instead of a 'd' and it's really annoying...
you shall not know my name chapter 2 . 3/15
I think this storyline fits with both underground and sega perfectly. Sonic's personality and his actions also seem just right.
I'm curious how sonia, manic and sonic will develop in the story and how it will all tie together.
Honestly I love the story and I can't wait to read more!
Moe43 chapter 12 . 2/11
i keep coming back to this and hoping you will update eventually. i love this and your writing so much.
saraphynxs chapter 12 . 11/6/2019
ahh this is such a great story! i hope to see it updated one day
karlaostojic7 chapter 12 . 8/18/2019
This is such a great story! I hope it gets continued. I’m curious about the plot. There are a lot of questions that need answers...especially after that cliffhanger.
karlaostojic7 chapter 7 . 8/17/2019
A weird tower that appeared out of nowhere and planets that are suddenly nearby? Sonic Colors anyone? And the reason for his headaches is revealed! Poor Sonic.
karlaostojic7 chapter 5 . 8/16/2019
Yessss I knew I needed to remember that line! I almost threw my phone when Manic stopped reading the prophecy. Like, yoU MF COME BACK AND READ THE DAMN THING I WANT TO KNOW MORE! And then he came back to it later. So all is good.
karlaostojic7 chapter 3 . 8/16/2019
I’m loving this story! This chapter especially. That Sonic and Tails sibling bond is perfect. And this line made me curious: “Their son would soon need them.” The voices in the Emeralds said that right? I have a feeling that it’s something I will have to remember...So Sonic has some unique connection to the Chaos Emeralds with how the story is going...my one weakness...makes me love the story even more!
Toxicthecat4836 chapter 12 . 8/8/2019
This is a really really good! I hope you continue!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/20/2019
God everytime I reread this I find something I missed! Like was Kuckles the one who sent that cryptic note with the shooter? Why does the Oracle not know about it only being six emeralds the first time? So much stuff! Can't wait for more!
Gokuu the Carrot chapter 12 . 5/23/2019
I'm just gonna say now, I LOVE this fic, and can't wait for the chapter... Hopefully there is a next chapter, it's been awhile... But I've seen that sometimes it takes a little bit for you to update so it's cool, I can wait, I'm just glad I found this. In my opinion, it's perfect~
PheonixQueen15 chapter 12 . 4/8/2019
This story is awesome! If or when you ever update again, I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
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