Reviews for Fate Stay Unfinished
ted chapter 13 . 5/9
Is there any chance of chapter thirteen being continued?
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 14 . 3/13
danger that setting sounds great
Lyra the Heretic chapter 14 . 11/4/2019
I love this _so muuuch_ o-

I can't even pick out a specific part to comment on, because it's all so perfect - though, the moment where Arturia notices Archer's bearing shift is... ESPECIALLY good... :D
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2019
I would really like to see a continuation of the shirou as a bnha student story if you ever get the opportunity
Doctor Bisharp chapter 14 . 8/21/2019
Someone, if not you, should continue this beautiful work of art I love this and want so much more a full story please with cherries on top
dark-feel chapter 13 . 8/17/2019
This one-shot reallly needs a continuation
Guest chapter 6 . 7/3/2019
Even though you say they're unfinished, I think many of them work well as one shots in the first place. Some of the cross-over stuff requires extra knowledge, but were still fun to read.

For story 5 and 6, what were you going to do regarding how completely different the two magic systems of harry potter series and nasuverse? Also, I think introducing nasuverse stories to Harry would be hard to write not just because you didn't have a particular 'goal', but also because I'm not sure it would change things much, since Harry seems to treat these as mostly fictional stories. In the same way Shirou reading the Harry Potter series won't change anything in FSN, I'm just not sure what divergence from canon would be present.
NeoScriptGenius12 chapter 13 . 5/26/2019
I really wish this one was continued.
Death update chapter 13 . 3/25/2019
The chapter on BNHA is very good and I would like to see a continuation if you are willing or perhaps a small one shot of him explaining his abilities and another on how he is viewed in the future.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/23/2019
possible continuation?
Alan Spacer chapter 14 . 1/3/2019
That was great. It felt like you had a really strong grasp on EMIYA's sometimes contradictory characterization, driven, yet directionless. I'd love to see this turn into something longer.
Treant Balewood chapter 14 . 12/30/2018
Nooo, I want more
Qriiz chapter 14 . 12/30/2018
Over one year for this chapter huh...
That means no chance to continue...
Urgh, that hurt. T_T
Serpent King chapter 13 . 12/29/2018
Neat, but I hate to see in it in this particular spot. Also, if this gets truncated by the site, let me know.

I will note some inconsistencies, though as most of fanon gets these wrong as well it's nothing to truly trouble yourself over unless you do decide to continue this or write another Fate fic where this comes up.

The reason that the Noble Phantasms in UBW have lost a Rank is because Shirou uses only one sense, sight, to record them. Touching them and actively using Structural Analysis on them would complete the blueprint stored in UBW.

The only objects Projected by Shirou that are crushed by the World are in fact, the Noble Phantasms, there's a few scenes in the Heaven's Feel path where we the reader (and Rin) learn that Shirou's Workshop is full of objects he's created through Projection. I think it was Day Nine where they were talking about this. (In the game, I haven't seen the Movie, and don't plan too, that path is my least favorite.)

Personally, I believe his NP copies are crushed for the following reasons, they're incomplete copies, most of them are unique... and the really big reason; They're Phantasmal in origin, as such, the common sense of the modern man says such things don't exist, so the World crushes them, just like Servants, the ghosts of long dead heroes who may or may not have existed but definitely wouldn't be running around in modern Japan killing other heroes for a wish.

The World might not notice if another massed produced kitchen knife or crow bar appears out of nowhere, but you can bet your ass it's gonna notice the moment a second Excalibur appears in the hand of some random kid in Japan. Haha.

Also remember that every weapon in UBW includes the history as well as the strength and skills of those who (or whom; I can never remember which to use) have wielded the weapon.

So on that note, I don't think Aizawa would be able to tell Shirou had less practice with Harpe compared to Kanshou and Bakuya because the former has actually been used in battle by people other than Shirou and Archer. So really, he'd probably have thought Shirou was better with Harpe than the other weapons.

Perseus' parameters in Fate/Prototype are D Strength, E Endurance and B Agility and if summoned as a Lancer, Medusa herself wields Harpe and she has C Rank Strength, D Rank Endurance and A Rank Agility as a Lancer, so either way, I expect Shirou would stand up to Noumu quite well while using Harpe. Granted, he'd still be seriously wounded, but they'd be effectively self-inflicted.
Burn Note chapter 14 . 12/26/2018
It's pretty sweet. And why not just jump to the good parts? Maybe as you write them, the path there becomes clearer. And if not, well that's fine too.
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