I like this:)

So good. I think I feel a nose bleed comming

That was a very entertaining read! Great work! I look forward to read more from you.

Possessive!Natsu is da best.
Just as crossdressing Gray is the funniest.
That was hilarious and cute and a little snippet of secksay all rolled into one. Gehee.

YES ;3

That was so awesome! I feel sort of bad for Gray, but only sort of.

Hot! But very hard to imagine gray looking like that.

In my opinion gray was pretty much a jerk for letting another person hit on him even if it was job. What happened to Lucy anyway wouldn't a real girl be more effective?

And another thing the phrase "bros before hos" is kinda weird cuz to natsu gray would be his ho and Lucy would be the bro, right? Natsu had referred to gray to the bro and Lucy as the ho but... Quite confusing is cuz I'm over thinking?

like :) if u keep writing good uke!gray stuff u'll see a lot of me . beware XD

Sorry Gray, Natsu got yo ass

This is brilliant! XD

HAHAHAHAHA XD LOVED IT XD AMAZING XD A CANON I TELL YOU XD

i love it! more!

really love natsu being so protected like that! XD

Natsu must be very depresed! lol

love it, so cute a very possessive natsu, ooh, poor gray.. :D hope you write more...

i loved it a lot :)