| Reviews for He's The One |
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   Abyssal Angel chapter 21 . 11/15/2019 Neat story. I liked it. Wasn't too fond of the weird little mysteries you left scattered about to remain open ended curiosities, but that aside, it was good. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/15/2019 Such a fun story! Really enjoyed it! |
| TwilightofHyrule chapter 21 . 1/29/2019 Brov! This was the best way to end this book. Oh my Gaia. Congrats, you are now In my top 10 of favorite FanFiction writers! |
| Lunanimes chapter 21 . 1/8/2019 This was great. I really enjoyed this story and how of much a unique concept it has. It was well written, and the romance wasn't rushed. I liked the intrigue and Cloud being Rufus' brother. Thank your so much for the story. |
| chaosmoon75 chapter 21 . 2/27/2018 First I would like to say I really enjoyed this story. There were a couple of time I felt there were minor inconsistencies and confusing plot points but over all it was a very enjoyable read. Thank you! |
| Morphious - ChangeSpinner chapter 21 . 7/25/2016 Interesting conclusion, I'll have to re-read this fic sometime in the near future, my remembrance of the plot is a bit scattered. |
| A fan chapter 21 . 7/19/2016 Wow, loved the chapter, loved the story, particularly loved the ending. That last scentense sent shivers down my spine, I really, really, *really* hope that is a foreshadow for a sequel? Anyway, thank you for a terrific story, I really enjoyed reading it. |
| MzaleYao chapter 21 . 7/18/2016 Wow... Quite the finalie of this story... I must admit, while I slightly became a bit distracted in the middle and confused as of what was going on, the pay off was very good. A bit curious as of some characters' background and how it all led up to them being part of the whole picture. The story started off a bit light hearted but ended on a very serious note and I must say you wrapped it up quite well. Also, language made a huuuge step up during the story. I'll end with thanking you for writing this and hope you're satisfied at the end, because I believe you should beTake care and keep on writing! /Mzale |
| LunarCatNinja chapter 21 . 7/18/2016 I can't believe this story is over... Hm. Guess that means I'll just have to reread it. ;3 |
| Faery66 chapter 20 . 4/27/2016 Hope to read more soon. D |
| draco7347 chapter 20 . 4/15/2016 cant wait for new chapters |
| LunarCatNinja chapter 20 . 4/5/2016 This story is awesome! I'm loving it! |
| merideth-kun chapter 20 . 3/30/2016 Very nice! Interesting twist with the twins. One suggestion? Section breaks. It's a little hard to tell where one scene ends and another begins sometimes. Even a * or an ~ on a line of its own would help. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/5/2016 Ouch. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/5/2016 "...Zack was safe, emanating support like most people emanate sweat or BO." What a lovely allegory... XD |
