Great stories, in particular your handling of Harry's emotions in Brutal Harry and solution to the nature of wand magic are top notch. I would've preferred less preaching and more focus on proselytization via personal relationships, it would be better for the narrative flow IMO.

The research aspect of the story is sometimes well handled but in general is too fast. Even in a field with lots of low hanging fruit, the amount of territory covered by one small lab in this series is too much.

Ooooh! I've had that exact conversation before. I'm definitely a judeo-Christian theist. I do doubt the Catholic doctrine at times though. I think it misses some important points.

The simple fact that you've chosen to capitalize "Truth" speaks volumes, specifically that your epistemology is shoddy and that your thinking is far more dogmatic than you might believe it to be.

I could go on, really. But this is not a debate forum, so I will merely say that while you most certainly have written a compelling (and binge-worthy) pair of stories, and that I think your assertion that most art is propaganda has some truth to it, the rest of your argument is nevertheless completely full of shit.

I mean really, "Atheism is a religion in the same way that off is a television channel." is almost as tired a cliche as the assertion it ridicules, and if you were to regurgitate the parent cliche on any serious debate forum it would rightly be torn to shreds. You are evidently ignorant, willfully or otherwise, of not only the many flaws which render your analogy a false one (I could write about them well past the character limit), but also of the immense gulf between different forms of atheism.

Yes, there are multiple forms of atheism, and they are most notably distinguished by the degree to which they bear the burden of proof. If this revelation came as a surprise to you, or if you do not know what the burden of proof is, then I suggest you hit the books. If it is true, then you have a lot of catching up to do.

Also, (though it is several years belated) good luck with your publishing endeavors.

Sincerely, a former christian.

Excellent story overall. The an answered my second no-longer-unanswered question about just what was that incident in Tokyo (the first being the Tiberium thing), so overall, no real loose ends either. Your explanation for just how Wizarding magic worked is also the best one I've seen to date.
Also, mad respect for how you portrayed the ideological sections, as well as including opposing views, despite being a self admitted REAL believer of your religion. Most would include their view as the truth and leave it at that.

Lastly, the chest mounted gatling gun is an awesome idea.

I was wondering what was the point of the c&c cross. I was wondering if it was just worldbuilding for worldbuilding's sake.
And then it came through. And it was beautiful.

Wait, Tiberium? Brotherhood or Nod? You w0t mate?

A conbinaition of blood rituals and sevrall types of runes , portrat has layer apon layer apon layer of copyed memorys basically a very intenactive and detaled V.I. theroreticaly another set of runes combined with it could make a processor Turning it into an A.I.

Despite your A/N before the chapter you still don't explain enough to make this story so far completely fucked up in every single time line and way, half the shit here shouldn't even be possible to happen according to the prequel, so why fuck with a decent story? This will only ruin what you had done with the other story

Oh this is an interesting one incorporating my cousin by adoption. And for whom over the years he and his wife and daughter have become a disgrace to the family. You may ask how I can call them a disgrace to the family is simple my five times great grandmother was a Clinton. A over the years I had access to history Plus their actions are in violation of much what out family stand for. And any family that violate such values are punished by the family dearly plus many of us disown them and cut of access to the family or even if we can set things up just right arrange for their arrest and stand trial. I know of some relatives for whom some have since past away and others if I ever found a way to get them in close proximity for me to have them arrested and turned over to Interpol so they can face trial or sentencing to the being tried in obstintia for their crimes for which the trials took place in international courts for which sadly most Americans have no clue about. And as a result leave the States they risk arrest. I found out about about this threw non mainstream media and for which was in many cases foreign news networks viewed online threw their English channels.

command and conquer crossover?

The idea of Harry potter being Xavier esque amuses me.

Generally, this story has few “continuity” errors. But here, we have Fiendfyre destroying a building, as Harry escapes. A building where we last “saw” Hermione and Tabane on the second floor. So Harry walks out of a building leaving it to burn with Hermione inside?

Dont have a problem with conflicting ideologies or anything, but its funny that it's always atheists looked down on for throwing things in people's faces. The only thing I have a problem with is anyone saying they know the truth of things. Much like lily who you're obviously channeling your beliefs through, you're not a prophet. You know nothing more than I do. Everything you believe you're just taking on as faith, when you die and go to heaven, come back and speak the truth to me

It had its good parts, parts that made adrenaline rush through my head.

But it also had its underlying bad parts. It had its uncomprehendable, very best biased sections.

thats all.

oh well.

thats all i have to say for this story. oh well. i admit, i had expectations for Hero Harry after reading Brutal Harry, i really did.

But, somehow, you completely went bat shit crazy in this sequel. I seriously don’t know how this happened.

All throughout this fanfiction, you go on and on, preaching about religious moral, christianity, etc. And sure, i have nothing against religion and all that but, your constant repetitions of ‘moral’ has utterly ruined Hero Harry.

I’m sorry to say this but, you failed this fanfiction. It had such potential. I’m slightly taken a back by this outcome.

My condolences.