| Reviews for The Birth Order Effect |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 12/22/2018 This breaks my heart by the second, Ugh! Very nice writing! Imma gonna keep going |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/10/2016 I agree with you about the Dark Clones! They don't get enough love! XD |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/20/2016 Actually, only Dark Don has a tail. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/1/2015 So they still don't know Don has AIDS? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/1/2015 Okay I'm confused. How can Raph and Mikey be fraternal twins, only born minutes apart on the same day, but then you say Mikey is 15 and Raph is 16? and then even though the birthdate says Don is the youngest, you make him 17? That makes no sense. How the shell did he get AIDS? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/1/2015 I would love it if Leo was the "Baby" brother! Maybe Raph is the oldest, not sure if Donnie would still be older than Mikey or not. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/5/2014 At the end of chapter nine I couldn't help but laugh at super gerbil and realize it was LILO and stitch! |
 XanaduHawk chapter 12 . 7/29/2014 Woah, didn't see any of THAT coming. |
| XanaduHawk chapter 6 . 7/29/2014 How can they have been born in the same year yet be different ages? |
| SpaceMeta chapter 14 . 1/4/2014 I've read your story, and I have to say that this is one of the best Fast Forward fanfics that I've ever had the pleasure of reading. It was open-ending, which left me internally begging for more, but I loved it all the same. Keep up the good work! :) |
| anon chapter 1 . 5/15/2013 I couldn't stop reading this in one sitting! I love how you gave more depth to the dark turtles. They are just endearing! ...in a twistes kind of way haha! This is one of the best fanfiction I have ever read. Keep up the great work! :D |
| SleepingSeeker chapter 11 . 5/8/2013 Aw! LOVED the interaction between Leo and Raph and Mikey. That right there was some of your best writing in this whole story! You do a great job with the brothers having heart-to-heart moments. i think therein lies your strength in writing - character interactions! |
| SleepingSeeker chapter 10 . 5/8/2013 Poor Donnie! |
| SleepingSeeker chapter 9 . 5/8/2013 Aaaiiiee! KARAI!? |
| SleepingSeeker chapter 7 . 5/8/2013 Curlie's voice: I'm a victim of circumstance! SORRY! Couldn't help myself XD okay, no, I get it, I completely agree with your assessment and the insight into the Dark Turtles personalities is refreshing. It's fun to take a pretty much over-looked character and add some depth or layers to them! poor poor Donnie! The beginning of this chapter, the scene between Leo and Donnie was some of your best writing so far. Very nice, very real. |
