wow, I'm so happy to find this story! I do love you've given Lyanna the voice of reason.

Ah! Now we're getting to the meat of it. Bring on the plot!

An interesting development. Where will it lead?

A much more cohesive chapter. Good work!

The chapter was a little chaotic as to what was going on but I have found that to be the case in this fic. Nonetheless I do enjoy it.

Very short chapter here. I'm guessing you ran out of words to write for it. It happens.

Good stuff. I am hoping that a Rebellion will still take place if only to see how these changes ripple out into the main story.

Interesting story idea. I am curious to see where it leads. The writing could use a little touching up but otherwise it is quite good.

Man this was a good fic bt then I saw when it was last updated and now I'm sad.

Please continue this fic. It's soo awesome, well written and not cheap.

I just want to write that I love this story. I love the complexity with Lyanna and Stannis relationship as well as the machinations with Aerys and the crown. I wish you'd continue writing this once the inspiration has struck again. I can only hope.

i enjoyed that, thanks

not much to say, well written, and wish I could keep reading but life... I'll be back for sure

So mate any plans to continue this awesome fic?
The story was left on edge and as a reader I hoped to see its final...

Good story but still so didn't get to see Stannis fate of Lyanna's final reaction.
Please man keep the writing!