No doubt you dont even check this anymore but i couldnt just let it go how could you stop there! Please resume i love this story to leave it unfinished... Im so sad.

im positive you either died or got amnesia or something...

as this thing comes from 2005...about two years..i think theres no hope you will update..

Anyways...good story...

alright i feel bad. when I reviewed all thoes other times I was going through a... rough patch. I know its no excuse for yelling at you so much I just can't stand to see this story discontinued. I'll be fine if you dont't update. i mean i havent updated in a while, we all know what its like! just try and give us a sign here!

truely wondeful story,

Lari

ok thats it. ur dead! NO ONE take this long to update!

are u dead? i seriously think ur dead because there is no way on this god forsaken earth that u could possibly take this long! i have been patient but this... this just isnt fair! i mean god! is it even possible to take THAT long to write a freakin chapter? FOR GODS SAKE! i love ur story, i really do but if i dont see some results i swear to god im gunna...AH! just update ok? LORD!

HEY I BARELY STUMBLED UPON THIS FANTASTIC STORY. ITS SO WONDERFUL!

ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE?

Hey, just wanted to say you have a great story so far. I'm caught up in your story and its plot twists.

You left a lot of things still untold, please update as soon as you can.

ok...COULD U TAKE ANY LONGER?

helo?u havent updated iin months!were r u?

OMG this story is AMAZING! I beg you for more please! I loved this story please dont stop doing what you are good at! I cant wait much longer...:P

Hey, this is Casavenna with a new penname! I found out that no one takes notice of me unless I make that bit of information known, so...

Procrastination is great! You get all your thoughts in one spot and can easily continue when you want! Yeah yeah, that's not all that true...But if you look at it that way, it's pretty good!

I love this. This is a wonderful and well-written story that I am enjoying immensely! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been busy...Computer problems and fixing up my own little story...This chapter is awesome. I can see you've already written the next one, so I'll go read that now. _ Yay!

It's me again, Saria-Emerald (I changed my screenname)! And once again you have satisfied your readers! (At least one anyway...) I await your next chapter with growing anticipation! o

Excellent so far. But I swear I'll kill you if you do a Link X Rayne relationship. Bring Malon back at somepoint in the story (hopefully not close to the end) and you will get yourself an instant 10/10 from me. The romance between her and Link when they were kids was just cute! _ You were so EVIL killing her off like that! .\_/.

I just had to love Death's personality. Its either cold and harsh or rather sarcastic and joking depending on the situation. Make him appear some more.

Chronos is cool. All those fantastic quotes he makes. You invented quite a character. :)

oh my gosh, wonderful story! I just finished reading it, and i love it so far. i can't wait until the other chapters