I loved this story! By the end of it, my heart fluttered for these two. You're such a great writer. Hope you write more A&A! :D

Very sweet. Loved it.

How could I not love this?!

Wow, this was so romantic, and so sweet!

To be honest, I think that the summary is a little confusing for those who don't know the song. It could look like a grammatical mistake. You could put quotation marks in, and also fix the tenses in the last two sentences (it has to be consistently past tense or consistently present tense, so either 'should have been', 'knew' and 'could', or 'should be', 'know' and can).

So either:

'I don't know why she's with me. I only brought her trouble since the day she met me.' In his personal opinion, he should have been jailed for corrupting a young woman like her. But he knew he could never stay away from Ariadne. Not now, not ever. Arthur's POV.

Or:

'I don't know why she's with me. I only brought her trouble since the day she met me.' In his personal opinion, he should be jailed for corrupting a young woman like her. But he knows he can never stay away from Ariadne. Not now, not ever. Arthur's POV.

I thought I'd recommend this, since the fic itself is so beautifully written and I think the summary in its current state lets it down some. I think the second option sounds nicer, but the first is in the same tense as the story. You decide.

Hope this helps!

Excellent!

it was great...

Your writing is awesome! I really enjoyed this!

That was an amazing story.