This is very well written and the plot is great as well. The only thing would be that Nanjiroh's catchphrase is 'mada mada dana', Ryoga's is 'mada mada daze'.
Please continue to write fanfictions with the pairing Ryosaku.

love it

Wow, that was beautiful! I really loved it! It was very well-written, and they were not really out of character, just a believable version of their more mature selves.

The only thing I believe is missing is a more expanded conclusion, something with a greater sense of closure, perhaps a scene where they are now together as a couple, maybe heading to Australia. That aside, this was sweet.

Good job!

sayume214

Awww _ so KWAIIIIII! :D

Oowwwwww the last past so romantic! I'm read it while smile like it happen to myself but I miss the old shy girl, feel like miss a thing. However, the story really good! Well done. :)

I really love this story.
It's so romanctic.
And I really love the proposal that ryoma made.
Keep up the good work.
And many fics to come.

I really like this story.
I like the first part when they play a game in a public place like the train.
And I like when ryoma patience is once again tested by fuji.
And the second part of the story is funny because ryoma and ryoga have to fight in a high class jewelry store.
And also I like the part when ryoma called sakuno his future wife.
And part is like the most because ryoma and sakuno see each other again.
Please update soon.

Awh, so interesting! Want more!
I love the Echizen's "Sakuno complex!" Haha, so funny!
Please update soon!

-Jiin

more more please ! :D

Kawaii ! _

getting interesting by minute *_*

one word LOVE ! :D

Waaah, I just love this story! *-*
I'm really curious how the next chapter is going to be with all regulars together plus Sakuno and Ryoga. And Ryoma undercover.. haha.. Can't wait! :)

Super like...
Next one please...
Awesomeness...
Keep it up...

Haha this is funny.. XD
i can't wait for the next chapter :)!
Keep it up!