I am sobbing! I AM SOBBING!

I'll come to your party LokI!

But, why, this is depressing,... very depressing

TT

Ohhh, that's... depressing. *wipes eyes* I'm kinda surprised you didn't have his mother make an appearance, though. No, wait, nevermind, that would've been even worse...

Beautiful story! And utterly heartbreaking as well.
I love it :) Are you going to write more?

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Right in the feels!

Poor Loki, that's just sad. I would really like to see this continued and not just a one-shot. You did an really good job at writing this chapter. Hope to see more! :)

OMFG I'm sobbing out loud right now... You really know how to wrench someone's heart out, smear it across the pavement, and then piss on it for good measure... Awesome story... I wanna give Loki a hug so effin' bad!

...this is the fastest i have ever started crying for a story

Darn...I choked up a bit...Cause this happened once kinda. A friend of mine's birthday is on the same day as mine, so our birthday parties were merged. My birthday cake was forgotten. It sucked and I got fewer presents. ;(

DO YOU WANT TO SEE ME CRYING?

You... why did u write this? *sobs*

I just put mascara on! now its all over my face and omg i was seriously crying! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME!
you should have another chapter be the next day and thor comes and loki is still sulking and thor comforts him and yah! because, you cant just end like that!
well, thanks for making me cry and mess up my makeup but it was worth this amazing story :) *huggles*

A very beautiful sad story, liked the illusion part.