| Reviews for I need you |
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   RhondaLara chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 Enjoyed this and also your Christmas Story! |
| Lily G Parker chapter 1 . 6/24/2013 I like how this story has a moral. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 Very good nice story |
| Sara chapter 1 . 10/3/2012 Love this, please write another chapter. |
| Shipper08 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012 I thought thiswas a vey good story,hope you write more for them. |
| robinsaweet chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 Well done! Sweet - really enjoyed it! |
| IaMcHrIsSi chapter 1 . 9/16/2012 So sweet! Shame that it is a one-shot! I would read any following chapter! You did a really good job! |
| V. Emily chapter 1 . 9/16/2012 Great job on your first Densi fanfic! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The emotion was good and you were pretty precise about staying in character. :) The only real errors I saw were with dialog. Here's an example of how dialog should be punctuated: "Hi," said Joe. Not "Hi.", said Joe. Also, make sure you skip a line whenever a new character speaks. Example: "Hi," said Joe. -skip a line (or two, on this site)- "Hello," said Jane. As opposed to: "Hi," said Joe. "Hello," said Jane. Only omit the skipped line(s) is the same character continues to speak. (Ex., if Joe had kept speaking after he said "hello" you wouldn't have needed to skip a line). I hope it was helpful! Again, I was very impressed with this fanfiction and would definitely love to see more! :D You're really good and the dialog thing isn't such a humongous deal. -V. Emily (not logged in right now, so it'll say I'm posting as a guest) |
| deksi chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 good story. i think it should stay a one-shot. well done |
| LisaG16 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 damn, if this would only really happen on the show, ya know?! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 very good story. Mind a sequel where they break it to her mom? also, you need kit-kats to bribe me. ) |
| ShipperM chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 so cuteee :) a great one shot! you shoul keep writing them :) |
| No.1TwiFanpire chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 Oh my god I loved it. It was amazing! I was thinking of something like this too, but im not a writer so im happy u had the same idea too :) Great job |
| Dixon-Vixen13 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 Loved this story so much! Great job |
| Bookworm608 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 OMG! I L.O.V.E.D it! It was totally adorable and totally cute and I just couldn't stop awwing. Kensi thinking she wasn't good enough for Deeks...not wanting to be alone... the way Deeks just drops everything and goes to her when she asks... the 'I love you's,' it was all just ah... lovely. Congratulations on your first Densi story; it rocked :D |
