He’ll yeah this story was so cute and so good! I’m glad I gave her a whole read cause sometimes I leave tabs open of stories and I never finish them

Wooooooo she best beat him up

I think for ur first ever lemon you did pretty good! It feels a little rushed (tho naturally firsts times aren’t usually aren’t very long) the writing itself feels like it’s hurrying it along if that makes sense. I know you wrote this a while back and you’ve probably improved from here, but I like leave input in someway just to let authors know that I’ve read their stuff idk haha

Uhhhh ooohhhh just get the girls outta there and burn the place down Natsu smh. Also is Lucy even getting paid any of the girls really, if they’re forced and can’t really leave it doesn’t seem like money would be of any use to them

In regards to ur authors note, I don’t think anything bad happening to Lucy is unreasonable considering where she is ahahah

AHHHH this is crazy! The reality of the situation those young girls are in really emphasizes the importance of this job! And Natsu realizing he’s in love YES that’s just MINT right there

I’m really liking this concept so far! And I love when Natsu or any dragon slayer gets all protective, it’s so cute!

Absolutely adored this fic!

This was a nice story
Thank u for sharing it with us

the constant use of 3rd person description (eg; the dragon slayer, the stellar mage, repeat) did get tiresome after the first few times but i enjoyed the story nonetheless. thank you for finishing it.

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Over already!but in all honesty this was such a nice read. no one was ooc and it's very well written overall, well except for typo errors every now and then but still! amazing fic! keel up the great work and as always, Nalu forever! 3

the smut is just right! like i said again, I can picture natsu treating lucy exactly like this smut wise anyways ;3 hahahaha. i love it! 3

love how you portrayed natsu coming in terms with feelings. I can see it being canon, no one is ooc and i love it.