wow, that was masterpiece!

Just saying, I literally made an account just to tell you how much I love this. I am a die hard for Zoro and Nami, and actually never really read fanfiction...if I did, it was very much just smut. But this, wow. It's like an eternal game, a tease, and idky but I loved that more than anything else. I was hella invested, so props to your writing for that. I didn't read anything that seemed out of character or forced and that is what makes a good fanfiction REALLY good, because it could've been. If you have any more suggestions or follow similar stories about ZoNa, Frobin...let me know. I'm hooked, thanks to you:P

I'm so obsessing over this pairing right now. I usually don't even really read M rated fanfics but for this pair, I feel it's appropriate for some reason. I hope you'll write more with them in the future!

all the back and forth was spicy :) i liked it, the smut was nice-ish lol

i loved all the tension in this story. It was interesting to see the psychological games they played and the need for them to challenge each other. The other Straw Hats were perfectly written too. Thank you for a sexy and tension filled read.

gahhh sweet ending and i love it...
thank youu

This is great so far. I read your comment in the last chapter about 'just wanting to post and be done with it.' As a writer myself, I am familiar with the feeling of just needing to put it out there. Rest assured, you write really well and this is a good story so far!

Can't believe that I've just read it now - but finally had the time after writing this examen

And another thing I somehow cannot believe is that the Story just came to an end :(
Not that this is a Bad ending - it was really Sweet and I loved it! - Its just I kind of grew attached to it :')

Till next Time

I actually very much liked the sweet ending, especially after all the heated confrontations between the two XD

All the different emotions you had them both running through in this entire story were great. It shows a lot of depth, both in their characters as well as your writing.

It has truly been a great experience reading this story. Keep up the great work ;}

I was so thrilled to see you had finished this. I have been secretly reading it. My favourite scene had to be the kiss in the rain in this last chapter. The way he leant his head on hers and begged her to touch him. Wow. I am yet to master the skill of writing about the sexual tension between the two of them and have learnt a lot from your work! Thank you

Oh my giddy goooooooood! This was an amazing answer to finish the story with! *teary eyed* and I'm so so soooo! glad you didn't make them all mushy at the end, thank god they still fought! I read so many of these where the author drops them straight out of character and you don't actually see Zoro or Nami in either of the two people supposedly involved in the story. This, I keep saying it, but Thank the HEAVENS! I'm not sure I could have handled it if you had just made them all lovey dovey and sickly...
I give this my stamp of approval! Well done!
-LapinNoire

Even though I felt annoyed that Nami was being jealous and moody about Zoro having been with another girl (I think its something that some need to learn to live with), I was strangely satisfied that Nami turned out to be a virgin, not only do I think it makes sense, but I just enjoyed it because it subverted the way that some authors tend to make her as, to put it loosely, more promiscuous. I felt that her being a virgin also indirectly gave us an insight into her character, she didnt compromise her body and virginity at any time, meaning she does see sentimental value in herself and her innocence, which I think is important considering her past.

But anyways, I was pleased with this update :)

I really enjoyed this update and ending, I thought everything fit in well, but it wasnt too overly typical or cliche :)

I thought the ending rounded it off quite well, Id never want a big cheesy ending for Zoro and Nami like a normal romance, because they are definitely not normal xD

I really want to help you out on your writers block though. If I may offer an observation, a lot of ZoNa stories tend to be relationship focused or based around a situation, such as being stuck on an island together, or sorting out their feelings towards eachother. Few ZoNa fics are based around plot with the romance as an added bonus or secondary part of the story, so perhaps thinking about general story plots might help. Or I might just be talking nonsense Q.Q

Aaaand finally they are together! It was starting to become really frustrating, and making me want to punch them in the head for their stubbornness!
Good work, a really good chapter ending a really good fanfiction.

Hello :) I've been re-reading some of your fanfics again; and I noticed that nearly all of you fanfics are marked as finished; well know I wanted to ask: 'When are you going to update this one again?'
This is really one of my favorite and it would be pity If you left this one unfinished