Can you please updating fate

I really like this! Please update soon :)

Great chapter so far can't wait for the next one please update for escapees pretty please I really like that story!

This is an interesting way of having Atem and Serenity come together! Please continue and update soon! I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

Glad I could help! Your stories going really well but now I'm confused as to why almost everyone around the main characters know the truth yet not the main themselves. Taboo is not a good reason to withhold information so please think carefully before you give away information like that to your characters. It's no fun when the characters don't have to work that hard to get the answers. ;D

Cool, I will wait for ch 4.

Seems like a good start!

I LOVE this tory! Please write another chapter. PLEASE?!

i hope you updait soon love it

i love it love it love it please please updait soon

I love this new fanfic it is great I hope you will keep it going. I better go read chapter two now can't wait for the next chapter.

Cool, I will wait for ch 3.

you seem to make out the side of light to be a bit helpless. remember that according to yin and yang they are equal and opposing forces. The creator of SM followed this belief in the manga with her characters of cosmos and chaos.
also according to the manga chibi chibi was sailor moon from the very distant future. You also seem to make atem excessively cruel. If your going by the manga or season zero he only punished those who deserved it, not the ones who got in his way.
Other than what I just mentioned your story could be really good please hust try to keep them in character.

Good Luck :D

Cool