I love the twist and I love that this is fiction and made up because honest-to-god anybody else who just did all that stuff to their boss wouldnot be hiding underneath their desk they be packing it

You’re a good writer but I’m having a lot of issues with the lack of development in the story. You give a lot of detail in the fluff storylines (like the prank war between Lula, Gramma Mazur, Tank and Bobby) but the stuff that is actually important to the story barely warrant a sentence. The capture of Maxwell happened in one sentence; I completely missed it and had to clue what even happened. And Steph and Ranger went from hating each other to saying “I love you” over the course of a paragraph. These are much more important plot lines that should have been expanded

we have to have a food fight somewhere with Helen and Valerie gone. great way to do that

I just want to say will there be anyone left

Oh I loved this story so much. I really didn't want it to end. Think I will have to go back and read it again.

Bravo! Bravo!

Story was way too long. Parts were very good but bogged down in the middle, therefore, I had to skip over to the last 2 chapters

I love this story

What a great story!

That was quite the tale! You have some imagination girl!

Go me. I guessed ML back in chapter 4. I did not guess she was using Joyce as a pawn. This has quite the plot twists.

I wasn't expecting Helen.

Okay. So it must be JB. But I thought her father was an unknown quantity, so I am confused. I will read on.

Perhaps Marilou is the mad bomber? This is a blast so far. Pun intended. Great job!

Totally fell in love with this story! Thank you for your imagination and writing skills! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!