Just found this little gem today. I feel that this story demonstrates tremendous thinking and characterization as well as familiarity with the setting. Excellent work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

It was. Amazing to read and proved quite entetaining.

This is not just an amazing fan-fiction, but an excellent peace of science fiction in general, the story, writing style and overall feel are so well done that they elevate the story to the level of true literature leaving in shame 90% of Starcraft published works aimed at pure fan-boys and written for mere profit. Using moderate/realistic approach to descriptions and still be able to create amazing images in the reader's mind is something that most writers strive to achieve (including me) and you seem to do it effortlessly.
I hope you keep on writing!