Good so far!

Poor Shikamaru...Sasori and his way of making puppets was always unsettling...and creepy.

Now I wonder what has become of Neji and the Hyūga in this story...

You did a very good job of inserting in the Avengers stuff...really good!

And nice seeing Tenten...wonder if we'll see Rock Lee and Might Guy. And the Hyūga and Neji...

This is a very good and interesting story.

Hashirama Senju is my favorite Hokage.

Though I do have a bit of constructive criticism regarding something I saw only once or twice, not often. When a character acts, even if they don't speak, they get their own paragraph. Since talking is an action, and we know we have to divide by dialogue, if a character acts then the speaker has changed even if they don't speak.

Hope it helps.

This is brilliant! The way you've matched up the backstories is amazing - I wouldn't have thought of it, but Juugo as the Hulk makes total sense. Please keep writing!

I take it Naruto will be Thor? The most powerful out of them all with maybe Sasuke being the "brother"?

Well now, this is a pretty interesting story you got here. I was actually waiting for something like this to be written and after reading the first three chapters, I find myself wanting more XD anyway, I really like your writing style and how you merge the narutoverse plus the marvel avengersverse.

so far, i'm really impressed with your casting.

let's see, we've got:

Kakashi: Nick Fury
Yamato: Phil Coulson
Karin: Black widow
Sai: Hawkeye (?)
Shikamaru: Iron man
Chouji: War Machine
Asuma: Jarvis
Ino: Pepper
Hashirama: Captain America

that's one heck of a line-up. Anyway, I've gotta know. Have you already picked out the other members of the avengers yet? Y'know? Thor and Hulk?

Hulk: could be someone with a curse seal like Juugo and Jirobo (sound 4) but I see them more on the villain side so I'm guessing it's gonna be a Jinchuuriki (maybe either Gaara, KillerBee, or Naruto) So instead of hulking up, it'll be something like going tailbeasts or whatever.

or somebody completely far out like Sakura?...XD

wait a minute. Sakura as the Hulk? hmmm. is it really possible? I mean she is pretty smart plus she has the whole other side thing going on with inner sakura...Nah! What was I thinking? I mean a pink she hulk? XD

Thor: Well it could be a Jinchurriki (again) or maybe someone from the Sannin (Jiraiya and Tsunade) Honestly, I can't really think much of a good equivalent for Thor :/

Oh yeah, I'm also curious about that Giant man bit you wrote. Are you actually planning to introduce more Marvel heroes in the form of Naruto characters? So are we gonna see people like the Black panther, Giant man, The Wasp, and etc?

Shikamaru as Iron Man. I love how you pulled out something as unexpected as that and his personality change. Very nice.

WRITE ON!

Sorry shikamaru but you're gonna join TATE :3c

Shikamaru the Iron Man as a puppet... I LOVE IT. Keep up the great work! :D Why does he have a bunch of bodies in various states of undress? Why more than one or two, I suppose is the question. I'm assuming the clothes are not attached, in case they get dirty, but I don't know why he needs so many bodies. I don't mind though. Seeing him switch his heart canister was soooo cool! :D I think he's my favorite so far. :)

OMG IRON SHIKAMARU poor baby getting captured by Sasori :cccccccccc STUPID DANZO YOU GOT WHAT YOU DESERVED

CHOUJI WAR MACHINE

PEPPER INO

JARVIS ASUMA

EVERYTHING IS TOO PERFECT I WILL EXPLODE

Oh, this is off to a very entertaining start and promises to be lots of fun. I love the casting/translation so far. Sai in archery gear is a particularly lovely image. I'm very sure I know who 'the Giant' will turn out to be, but I have only a tentative guess or three at this point as to 'the Iron Man', so I'm really interested to see who you went with. I have pretty solid suspicions as to who will be filling Thor's role, also, backed by the alliance you've set up with Lightning, and I can't wait to find out if you're thinking the same thing I am. _ I look forward to seeing it continue, however sporadic updating may be!

Very cool chapter I liked it a lot despite it mostly being informative only. So Karin's black widow cuz if red hair. Kakashis fury cuz the eyepatch. Juugo is hulk cuz of his anger issues that turn him into a giant monster that kills everything. I would have seen Gaara being the hulk more but I don't know if u have jinchurriki in this universe. Iron Man is tricky to guess, but I think either Sasori or third kazekage would fit. Sasori with armored puppets, kazekage with iron sand. Of if u want to stretch it have it be shikamaru who ends up being awesome playboy genius who invented his armor. Hashirama is obviously captain America which means ur only missing Thor since I assume either tenten (please be her) or sai will be hawkeye. Thor u probably set as Susanoo/itachi uchiha (possibly from a different dimension and wants to exterminate these sad excuses of uchiha) or Naruto as Kyubi. I can't wait to read and see if I'm right! Or wrong! I just reeeeeeaaaaaaallllllllyyyyyy y want to read it. Great job!
Suna No Ken

Question. Where's Naruto?

Ahhhhhhhhh Hashirama you are just the saddest. ;o; I WISH TO GIVE YOU A HUG. And omg HI KARIN AND SAI, Sai stop sassing Hashirama, you are so rude. XD

THE FAN IS THE SHIELD, IT IS TOO PERFECT :D WIELD IT WELL, HASHIRAMA

SO BASICALLY

HASHIRAMA IS A GIANT SWEETHEART

KARIN ROCKS

YAMATO IS ALSO A SWEETHEART BUT NOT SO GIANT

SAI IS A JERK

KAKASHI NEEDS TO TELL ME ABOUT IRON MAN