Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

I just finish read your story.
At first I read just out of curiosity, but I love it in the end.
Congratulations for you story!

Thank you for writing! 3

I love it! :)

Great Story, but where is the Sequel?

Very sweet story. Sad Padme and Jane didn't meet. Curious what a sequel to this would be like if you ever do one.

I'm sure Loki took a couple Golden Apples of Idun with him when he left. Or just happened to have them in his subspace pocket or whatever. That would have been a fun scene too. Also Loki meeting the Jedi would have been fun.

Regardless I love what's here.

This kind of makes me want to see Jane and Padme here meet. Interesting. The influence of the Naboo people and this galaxy as a whole should do interesting things for the future of Loki here. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

This story is wonderful!

This story is so beautifully wonderful I love it! :)

This was... this was... this was just... wow. Really good. I can't remember where, but there was one time you used "I" instead of me. I think it was when you were talking about her parents, and you said something along the lines of, "Our parents taught my sister and I to read and write", and it should be, "Our parents taught my sister and me..." but it's an easily made mistake.

Other than that, I really like your writing style. It's very mature, especially for , and I love seeing writing like this. Very good job!

Loving it

Yep, that a happy ending :) when I retire, I going to move to Naboo, ahhha that be awesome if it were a real place
( ***sigh :( ****) if only. Great story, thank you so much for sharing.

So lovely. I was scared for a moment how it would end, but happily, thank goodness!

Oh My god , please tell me there is a sequel to this story. It so great, I love the fact that Loki is a diplomat, so him. Loving how they met could, can totally see that happening. Tender and romantic moments awesome. Love this story keep it up!

Beautifully done with a happy ending!

But there is something I need to point out. My thoughts on this (throughout) was that it would be interesting if the brothers got together with their wife/girlfriend because they would be twins. And I think you must have thought the same as you used the Jane once in place of Padme in chapter 3. ;-)