It would have been a more interesting story ifas I stated previouslythere were not any missing dialogues and cut off sentences. It almost seems like whole paragraphs and sentences are missing, it made it very difficult to read.

I’m not even sure it’s going to be worth it to finish this story, there appears to be a lot of dialogue missing and cut off abruptly, which makes it difficult to follow exactly what’s happening.

Your explanation of the scars is one of the best I’ve read. It doesn’t make sense that there would be a mark from the killing curse.

Good story

Please please please stop using the word 'so' in your stories. It's infuriating. Sentences can't start with the word 'so' and you do it constantly in every single one of your stories I've read. I'm now avoiding them based on the username and that's such a shame as the premise and plots are good, it's just the writing is tedious.

Love this story! It has an interesting plot and is a great, weird, story. I love it.

this is enjoyable but your spelling and grammar are deplorable - sorry.

lovely story, i love snarry and stories where severus lives.

Can you please hurry up and post more stories and/or update soon? It's been almost 3 months since you last posted or updated!

I loved the lemons in the story

SQWEEEEEEEE! Cute!

Love it, but wish it was longer or had a epilogue or a sequel

It's spelt 'Shrieking Shack'

Please make a Mpreg sequel of this story next with Harry pregnant with Severus's children please and thank you.

Great story and glad Severus was both saved and vindicated