That was awesome it's reminds me of someone I once knew expect the confession did not go as well hence the "once" but of course because any girl deserves better then me that's why I love this fanfics

Well, I suppose with any convoluted series that is a fan favorite of any kind that there's the common-place "what if" high-school story line. It was...cute. I'm a bit of a fan of the pairing and loved how you characterized them (I would've liked it more if you put Cid as the bully instead of Snow, though). The names of the schools were a bit ridiculous (Oerba High, really?).

I'm satisfied with this story. It could've been better in SOME spots, but overall the experience was enjoyable.

8/10.

This is adorable. I'm glad you wrote this! And really, it just leaves me an impression where this was implied from the game - how Vanille runs away while Hope tries to catch her. I really enjoyed it. :D