Thanks for the read a bit sad

Well done - I enjoyed it very much. You wrote Jane well.

That was really, really good.

Ooh this is a wonderful extrapolation of the season finale. It adds depth and scope to what's there and you show such an intriguing insight into the characters and their motives - especially Jane, who is a notoriously difficult character to get a handle on. Such a beautiful style in this piece too. Lovely!

I didn't find this at all over-laden with the original dialogue; rather, I thought your story nicely supplemented it, just as Universal Muse implores for a very nice little tag. Thanks!

I really enjoyed this, and for some reason this line cracked me up (in a good way): (No one ever said fake-murdering people in the heart of law-enforcement territory was for the faint of heart.)

Beautifully written. Thankyou

This is just brilliant, and awesome, and... just wow!
Love the way you manage to convey what goes on in Jane's mind - especially certain references to past episodes.
I'm going to quote some of my favorite parts (but each and every sentence is quite stunning, I have to say - especially the ending!)
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(No one ever said fake-murdering people in the heart of law-enforcement territory was for the faint of heart.)
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Unlike the Odysseuses of this world, however, Jane doesn't need wax to stop his ears against her siren song; all he needs is the ring on his finger and the woman in front of him.
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(He's a con artist, he's always led a double life. Now his heart belongs to two women; in a twisted way, it makes sense. It's at once more and nothing less than he deserves, but life has always been puzzling that way.
Two separate women possess his heart, a third (most recently) has possessed his body, while a man – if the serial killer can indeed be called a man – is in possession of his mind. It is, he allows, a most strange ménage-a-quatre. Hmm… actually that would be a ménage-a-cinq, since he's part of it.
No wonder he sometimes feels as though he has a multiple-personality disorder.)

Really great tag. I liked it :)

Nice. I really liked the part where he says that he doesn't need wax, just the ring on his finger and the woman in front of him. That was cute.

Mobile ffnet doesn't show if a fic is complete or not.. And in this case, I hope not! I really enjoyed reading it :) you have a particular writing style that's very entertaining to read, and together with the aspects of the finale you decided to approach, made for a very nice read.

I loved the bit where he said who owned his heart, then his body, his mind. Very original (and true).

Hope to read more from you soon! (Especially if it is J/L :D)

This was good! I liked it!

I really like this one too (you can keep writing post-season-four-finale fics all you want). I especially liked the image at the end of the menage-a-cinq. And I'm glad you brought up Jane's wife. One of the reasons I've been (rabidly) anti-Jane/Lisbon shipping is because I feel like it lessens the impact of Jane's motivations to avenge his wife and daughter (both of whom, despite being motivations, are strangely absent in the show. I keep hoping they'll do more flashbacks or something with them). Anyway, brilliant, as always. :-D