Excellent idea and thanks for writing.

I loved your story. I too like to think that Hermione is more important. I hope to read 'The Heiress' soon! Keep up the good work.

Oh, She, that is so sad :'( Poor Neville

great way to touch on a sensative subject, She...

awesome, She! I love your work...Great to see lots of Bill and Charlie. *raises hand* I'll take Bill home, if Hermione don't want him!

sweetness, She!

as good as j.k. rowling! i've got to keep reading...

Whoa... freaky! This looks really good (I'm going to be up allll nite reading it!)

I loved it. Hermione and Ron, perfect. And though I'm not as big on Harry and Cho as some, it was good. I must warn you to be careful. These are only fifteen year olds you were dealing with. If my mom caught me doing a couple of the things Hermione did, I would be... how to put this lightly... disowned in a more permanent fasion. But it was wonderfully written. Good luck with the next story. Please try to stay away from R-rates. I really want to read the next one, but I'm touche about R. And I know I'm not the only one that thinks this. I know it needs to be grimmer, but it is completely possible to do that without needing and R-rating. Hey, one friend of mine can make me absolutely scared of being in dark woods alone, and I mean pee in your pants scared, and it wasn't even PG-13. Pleaes try to keep it clean. I really like your style of writing and wish to enjoy more stories.

Wow. Your writing is just like J.K.'s herself! ::adds to faves::

Adding this to favorites, again...Now my review: Bravo! You've probably heard this before

but this is really my favorite HP story. I have no idea why you don't have thousands of reviews.

I consider this one of the hidden gems in the HP world, but at least I'm one of the lucky

people who know of it's existence. _ I also can't wait for the next chapter of The Heiress so

please post it soon. I really could go on and on but I would embarrass myself so I'll end it here.

So far I am really enjoying your story. The only comment I would make is to consider your audience. In this case, I think you can write with the assumption that your readers will have read the Harry Potter books. Therefore, you can dispense with the explanations of who characters are. You don't need "talking with Harry about their friend Sirius Black." We should know who Sirius is.

If I knew what to say, I'd say it, and it'd probably take a few pages, so I'll leave it at I really, really liked it.

Wow- it must have taken a LOT of effort to put this story together! Interesting that in dealing with Winky you chose to "kill her with kindness," while I took the "tough love" approach.

Did you know there is a way you can transfer your other chapters to those story so you don't lose your reviews? 'neways I love this series! I can't wait to read the next chapter to it's sequel!