Woah. Ok, so is Izaya dead? I mean he stinks and is cold. . . creepy. . . but in a good way.

This is hauntingly beautiful. I t sends down my spine nice written.

Loved it

Oh... Creepy Shizuo!

Awesome! *-*

What the- why- what the... Oh ho ho, you had me for a minute there. O.o Took me a bit to realize that Izaya wasn't 'sleeping all day', but in fact deceased. Seeing as he's my favorite character, I have mixed emotions about you killing him off. Which is not to say this isn't a good piece. It is. I like it.

Kinda makes me think of the song "A Little Piece of Heaven," by Avenged Sevenfold. Only thing missing is the part where Izaya comes back from the grave, kills Shizuo, then Shizuo comes back as well and begs his forgiveness and they get married and kill everybody... Wow, I think I went off on a tangent.

Also, was there some insinuated romance between Izaya and Kadota, as well as some jealousy on Shizuo's part that I detected there...? :D

Whoa...this fic was so dark and chilling but very well written *nods in approval* It kind of took me a few reads though before I realized what happened to Izaya. Anywho: Good job on this :D Really enjoyed reading it

O_O *gulp* This was...eerily satisfactory. I'm getting chills down my spine and I'm seeing weird things in shadows now, but it felt...complete. I would have liked a little more background, but I guess you wanted to make it more mysterious, so it's a nitpicking thing on my part. I loved it. It's so funny how I'm always going on about good solid stories with plot and character development, yet I can fall so hard for a little ghost story. There is a vague plot, and there's basically one character who we are led to believe is thoroughly insane, but...damn that was so good! Kudos, keep up the great work.

Honestly, as soon as you mentioned the lump of Izaya in bed, not moving for days, and just the general atmosphere of the fic i caught on T_T My, my. You certainly write in a freaky way, and i definitely love this. Shizuo's character is somehow in place, yet extremely distorted... Meeeeeh... *shivers*

Oh I love it it's not long enough to me though well, it's truly stopped at the right place though

This is beautiful. Love how the lights being cut lets the scene dwell in such an illusion. Had my skin crawling (and a little turned on. Not the first fic to do this. I'm starting to question my kinks). Magnificent tension; I kept inching up in my seat and trying not to grip the laptop.

This is creepy but I really love it.
Is Izaya dead already? I mean, stinking that much.

While I was reading this I felt a chill and it actually creeped me out alittle. Not a bad thing I really liked this story I love how it was written. I would love to see what would happen when Shizuo figures out what has happened to Izaya.
Great story!

It took me a few reads before I realized what really was going on...
How very dark.
But I love how you portrayed Shizuo's want of Izaya, even if it meant...this.
It was oh-so-sad. :'( I wish Shizuo would snap out of it and realize what he's done...I mean, he'll have to know eventually...