I have never read the word "susurrus" in any kind of fanfiction. This is great. Never forgot about that word since my latin teacher taught stylistic devices.

Loving the story so far thanks abk

This is soooo good! Did you finish this and put it on a diiferent site possibly? Or did you publish it?

Thank you so very hooked on this story, I'll try to find your bkog5

I first read this fic years and years ago, when only a few chapters had been published. Since then I've returned to it in regular intervals, maybe once a year. I think of it far more often, it's one of the best fics I ever read. I long ago accepted that this is all the story I ever will get. I want to thank you for putting it out there, it's rare to read something that draws me in like this did. I hope you are allright, wherever you are, and doing something that feels worthwhile. hugs

Please write more. Finish!

I can't believe I got sucked into starting this and it's not complete! Do u ever plan to finish it?

I love that u used the "completely, irrevocably " as something Edward said!

Massive love for this fic! Such a precarious cliffhanger...any chance for an update?!

Massive love for this fic! Such a cliffhanger...whoa! I love these characters and all this action. Can't wait to see how bella get's out of this pickle.

Glad they are back together!

So now she knows who he is!

Hmmm, did she smell gunpowder?

I've loved the transformation of edward and his burgeoning feelings, but I'm super excited about some spy action about to begin...!

Intriguing. Nice action scenes ;)