I love the relationship between Yachiru and the Akatsuki, it's so lovely! And Kisame is such a flirt, haha! Can't wait for an update :D

YAY UPDATE! :D

So, who are the new antagonists? They seem pretty cool and badass. I wonder what Yachiru's relation with them...

Ha, Yachiru is a tease. :3

I have to admit, I thought that Itachi was a little OOC in this chapter. He seems more... social, I guess. I don't know if that is your intention, but I just wanted to point it out in case it wasn't.

On to the adventures!

WAAAAAH! YOU UPDATED! *tears of pride*

Poor Kisame, he gets to dig! I always thought Kisame would have an issue with cooking fish, no? Cuz.. They're like cousins. Twice removed and whatnot.

Silly Itachi.

A new boss equals another person Itachi shall pwn. MUAHAHAHA.

please write soon i love your story

Waow. I must admit - this is good. And i's only the first chapter! Nice, long, meaty paragraphs. Though I've no idea what most of it means, I'm impressed.

I love this so much i cant wait to read you entire serious o please dont stop writing orgiv a cliffhanger ending

love it keep on writting

great chappy

i luved it

Yachiru taking on tha akatsuki? Interesting. For a moment I thought that she was going to escape, glad to know Itachi can still kick your while just looking at you. Hahaha. And Kisame and Samehada arrived.

Yachiru got quite the actitud. "Smirk". Ohh Hidan and Yachiru arguing I can feel the sexual tension from here. Hope you continue.

Very well done TayMor, reading the first part actually caught my attention, and was really well done. :D

Yay an update! :D Poor Hidan, always getting his head severed by Kakuzu... *sigh* Oh well, it's funny anyways, ha ha! Do I detect jealousy from the impassive Uchiha? *raises eyebrows in interest* Excellent chapter, definately answered a few questions that I had. Keep 'em coming!

So it was the baddies that made the trio! But... Wasn't it four shinobi in the previous chapter? You know, with the disabling thingy?

"You four-hearted monster!" Not five hearts? I'm not even sure.

Holy ... Why am I finding these errors NOW? Erk.

I'm the worst editor ever. I. Am. So. Very. Very. Very. Extremely. Sorry. I think I missed it, simply because the first one didn't tell me who the trio was... Oops.

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YOU KILLED ITACHI! Poor baby... Why didn't you make Kisame taste it first? WHAT is Tobi planning to do? ... I smell danger... (Is it smelling if I'm reading it...?)

YOU KILLED A SPY! Not as important as attempted murder on Itachi, but I guess it's semi-important. Poor Shikamaru, he couldn't figure it out!

Hidan... Is creepy. Is he really old? I thought Kakuzu was the oldie. Like, OLD, oldie.

This is gonna be one lazy (and crappy) review, since I'm rushing like mad. Blame Nuit Blanche, kay? Tight schedule, and I'm just writing this review so your number of reviews increase by ONE REVIEW. WOO! I'll probably PM you the rest of my thoughts, so PREPARE for a SUPER DUPER LONG PM!

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