What bad timing... but yes, I imagine it must have been so very difficult for Fiyero, especially not knowing if Elphaba felt the same way

AH! This was so beautiful! I loved it! Your Fiyero was spot on! And I really liked upset Glinda too. Fantastic work!
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So happy you found the time to write! This was great. And definitely yours. You have a style so easily identified, which I think is quite a thing to achieve. I love Intermission fics (currently working on my own attempt) and this was wonderful. I really believe that he loved Glinda a lot, just not enough. If not for Elphaba, he could have lived a reasonably happy life with Glinda, even if something undefined might have been missing. Great work, though I was sad to see it end and to see it end where it did. You have a tendency to leave me in frustration :) Thanks for a great trainride, anyway. Keep them coming! Holly

Wow..such emotion! awesome work here! Loved this one-shot! Feel so bad for Glinda..man! Great story! so glad to see you writing! :)) Was so happy to get this! awesome work! Brilliant! loved the characterizations! Perfect job! :)