Empezaste muy bien la historia : ) muy acorde al anime , es una lastima que no la continuaste : (

Since you mentioned your one-piece one shot on the community I had to look you up:) I had no ideal you had all these wonderful dbz stories! I really love this one...I hope you are planning future chapters:) I'm gonna fav/follow you to see;))))

I love your portrayal of vegeta. You can get him down very well! The back and forth banter was nice :D nice too see the playful (if sarcastic) side of him. Poor yamcha. Can't imagine the torture he must be going through. 15 years down the drain...

I love that this 3 year fics doesn't entirely revolve around vegeta and bulmas budding romance (if it can be called that) I'm loving the corporate scene, the secrets, the tension, the conspiracy theories! It gives bulma a whole new dimension knowing she's dealing with that side of business. Usually we just hear about her going to work, creating stuff, having bad days, etc. but you've really put us there, where the action takes place. Awesome! Please make an update can't wait to hear more on the spy theories, the gala and the date!

Omg! I love this story already! :D seems like this story is going to be different than the regular "mysterious 3 years" :D I love Vegeta's and Bulma chart it was cute :D and Vegeta's thoughts about Bulma were adorable and cute also xD it's funny how he had to think about other things when Bulma was touching him ;) hahah this story is very amusing :3 though that Tamera or whatever her name is getting on my nerves -.- snooping on this that she's not suppose to find out about t-.-t gahhh I hate yamcha tttt-.-tttt I hope Bulma dumps his a*ss soon ;p Shes already having thoughts about Vegeta! ;D Yay! :D lol can't wait for that chapter when they kiss ;) it's gunna be epic! :D please update as soon as you an please! :D love the story already and I can't wait for chapter 2! :D ahh Vegeta you're soo cute and adorable :3 and one hot sexy a*ss saiyan ;p Bulma won't be able to keep her hands off of you later on ;) Being 5'5 Vegeta has one nice Body ;) Vegeta has an inch advantage to Bulma who's 5'4 x3 lol I'm a weirdo xD anyways...can't wait for the next update! Keep up tge good work can't wait for more chapter to come! Love the story already! :DDD

Hmmmm... only one chapter so far, you say?
I am intrigued by this!
Firstly, I love fics that feature Capsule Corp a bit more in the main plot of the story - corporate intrigue is ALWAYS fun, and hey, if it involves Bulma/DBZ then all the better! :D Anyway, I like your pacing and narrative - the dialogue seems natural, and I really like your depictions of Dr. & Mrs. Briefs. They aren't the silly one-liner characters they are in the show. These kinds of fics are the the author's chance to show them in a different light and I think you've got a great grasp on them!
I'm REALLY interested to see where this goes, with "Tamara" and the corporate subterfuge, lol. And NATURALLY... where that lovely conversation between B&V is going. Vegeta is tough to get down during this time period - and I like his dialogue in this chapter. Great job! I hope you update this soon. :D hehehe

Very nice! Love the sciency stuff-glad I'm not the only one who thinks it's really interesting. Great job with the dialogue, and you kept a very good pace throughout. Looking forward to when you write more... :D

Fun story. I like it so far. Please continue, if possible. I am trying to give feedback for stories I like, because recently, I realized it does make a difference to the author.
So, kudos!

Great start so far! You've got my attention. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Please update :D

Great start! Love the writing style and it's definitely different from other get-together fics I've read over the years. Can't wait to see the rest!

I like your take on Bulma, great story so far!

I like all the little info on genetics and whatnot. Made me feel like I was back in Biology. D Update soon! I'm enjoying this! 3

I really enjoyed reading this, not going to lie I thought I'd outgrown the whole three years phase, people tend to do the same thing but I couldn't help myself and decided to read yours and was glad I did. It was written really well, I really like how you added the whole espionage thing it's going to make the story a bit different and interesting, I cannot wait to find out whole this Tamara woman is working for and what she is upto! Update soon!