I've never cried at the beauty from a story like I've cried at this. It's touched my heart and awoken feelings I once thought were lost. Thank you for that.

This was brilliant! I've never thought of this pairing before, but now it seems to make so much sense. It's perfect. So many thoughts in my head now.

The flow of this is like a river. It fits with this beautifully. You did a great job.

This is beautiful.
I love, love, love the idea of Donna as a bartender. And River making sure she knows she's brilliant. And my two favorite women in the same story, being brilliant and lovely and sincerely caring about each other even when they only interact in the bar.
Thank you. I cried.

Oh-oh, but River is married! : P
I like this story. Especially because it is shown from Donna's point of view.

This is utterly gorgeous. I love the wordplay and sensuality.