I am glad this didn't actually happen like this. I would've cried my heart out!

I rather enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing!

I thought this was an amazing way this scene could have gone down. I actually wish this had been real! So intense and I could imagine it perfectly in episode format. Wonderful! :D

This was really good. It's kind of odd how similar this really was to the actual episode. Of course there were still differences, but the general tone and some of the details were eerily spot on. Lizzy at the end against the door and sobbing. Oh let me hold you and make everything better. Just really great structure to convey all the emotional energy that was going on in that conversation. And I totally feel cheated that there wasn't a make out jump cut. I always thought there should be some kissing in that scene before she came to her senses. Hatred and love is a think line sometimes. All those emotions and all that passion, I can totally see some making out. ;)

Oooh! Well that was different! I am wondering what is going to happen with the next webisode and frankly, OMG! I was not expecting that kiss! I mean, the most we've gotten out of those two is a hand on the shoulder or arm, never anything that 'improper'. I wonder how Mrs Bennet would have reacted to that scene haha. The characterisations were perfect though. Darcy, with his complete and utter lack of social awareness, one really doesn't walk up to someone, say I love you even though I shouldn't because you're so inferior to myself and then expect them to just go out with you. Even though Darcy is unbelievably sexy! Loved the story.

I thought you did a brilliant job with both of them. Loved the way you segged into it. You portrayed their emotions beautifully. My heart was literally breaking for poor Darcy. And Lizzie's stunned amazement and then grief. Loved the kiss in the middle of it. Oh my. The whole segment was very emotionally draining - a baring of souls to some extent.

with passion such as that, what is going to happen when they do fall in love!?

...Funny that bar a few different names and kissing, this is essentially what happened on the show.

Please tell me you are going to continue this! It was amazing.

Bah! You have GOT to do more!

This. Is. Wonderful!
One of my greatest fears for this producion is that they won't include Darcy in the first proposal. While I appreciate the limited POV that Lizzie vlogging brings, I feel we really need Darcy in that scene. Your version is a realistic adaptarion, and I really hope that the proposal episode mirrors your version in many ways (not the least of which is the kissing scene...).

Darcy and Elizabeth FTW.

Loved it! :D Still cannot wait until the show us Darcy!

Okay, this is what I want you to do. Send this to Bernie Su and say THIS IS WHAT I WANT TO HAPPEN!
That was AMAZING! And I loved the style you wrote it in because it left a lot to think about but we also got thoughts from Darcy too!
You've set the bar so high! But, yeah, please please please write more.
I would love to see what Darcy is going to do on the next video :D
Ally xxx
P.S. This is how me and my friends wanted the proposal to happen. I REALLY hope they do!

I have to say that was amazing. You captured the world the Lizzie Bennet Diaries has created so perfectly. That was even better than what I had imagined for the series to do itself.

Hello fellow LBD writer,

So far you're the only one I've found, but we must hold out hope, mustn't we. Anyways, now that the pretentiousness is done with, great story! I loved the style, even though I feel your other ones suit you better. But that's just a personal opinion, and the story was amazing nonetheless. This was totally realistic in every single interaction, and I loved the little part at the end that showed Darcy making a video clip in place of a letter. It was so fitting!

Great job, again, and please write more!

TaE