That may have been one of the most heart wrenching things I've every read. You captured Naruto exactly.

Sooo cute .
I know this is a one shot, but I want MOOREEE :D
Good job, really enjoyed this story!
Arnita~

cuuuuuuuuuutttee

Awwww, grinning stupidly so much right now. That was so cute and bjlkwerklboiwewre INVITED ME TO YOUR WEDDING GUYS. TAKE ME WITH YOUUUUU

Awww Naruto's story is so moving and the way Sasuke ends it is totally awesome!

I like the way you wrote from Naruto's point of view concerning how he felt and why he related to Sasuke so much. It seems like you captured Naruto's voice and personality very well in this :)
Only thing is there are quite a few typos/grammatical errors, but I know I make a lot of mistakes when I write so early in the morning too ;)
Ending caught me by surprise though. Very cute. 3

Wait hold up...he proposed...right before he put a gaping hole in the chest of the love of his life...

Ok I loved it, it was awesome no other words can describe it.

Distraction. that was so cute. i love how you worked up some sad angsty answer that would tug on everyone's heartstrings... then just through in a twist. Also its good to know that i'm not the only one on fanfiction in the middle of the night instead of doing my work. i hope you do get around to getting your essay done at some point tonight