Very clever! Brilliantly written, I loved it!

Great story :D my poor little temporally-linear human mind couldn't quite grasp the full extent of its awesomeness...But. The wibbly-wimeyness is quite awesome to behold nonetheless XD
The part when 10.5 thought 10 had done something was rather...chilling, since that was actually a very real possibility. I love this take on 10.5 and Rose in the AU though. Of course they are never going to be satisfied living a dull, normal life anywhere or anytime.

Liam vaguely reminds me of Ianto.
This is a good thing, don't worry.

Loved this

Oh my goodness. This story is exactly what I have been looking for. It seems to me that the only stories about 10.5 are ones where life is beautiful because he and Rose are together, or life is terrible because he can't deal with being human.
I'm glad I finally found what about THE ADVENTURES OF THE HUMAN DOCTOR! :)

I must tell you I have probably read this story about 10 times (and I don't remember if I've ever reviewed) but I must say it is just outstanding and one of my very favorites ever. Outstandingly written and hilarious and the Doctor is done perfectly. I am so jealous of your writing skills haha! The way you've depicted how the Doctor is viewed by Torchwood, and his actual behavior while working there and the relationships he's developed are the most true to his character I've read on this site and it is so so so much fun to read! Any chance you'll write any more Doctor Who fics in the future?

I can't actually express in words just how much I love Dr. Adams. He's fantastic. In other news, this story was great. Liam was written brilliantly, and I thought that the Doctor and Rose and the Doctor's relationship was quite awesome. If you decide to write more of these stories, I most certainly will not complain. Keep writing, have a fantastic day, and DFTBA!

Great story :) I'd love to see maybe some one-shots on how those stories about the Doctor came to be from the POV of the witnesses? Sounded interesting!

Oh, correction: chapter, singular, I missed. And I was not expecting it to end so soon. But I get it. I think I was just expecting them to have to do more Crack-sealing than the other Doctor did. But still, great story. :) If you think of any others with TenToo, his adopted evil scientist, Rose, and Liam, I'll be sure to read them!

There is no way Liam dreamed up that fantastic conversation between Rose and the Doctor. Onto the other chapters I missed...

I can't explain how much I love that "the Dovtor gets a bit stroppy when Rose is out of town."

This was a really excellent story. I particularly love the way you portray the dynamics of the Doctor and Rose's relationship as seen from the outside. Very well done!

Do more like this but they can't forget what happened, and of u do , do more Rose/Ten moments please

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I loved this story!
The end does induce hysterical laughing, when you realize things worked out but that the results are scary. And then there was he rest of the story, most chapters where fun, you do an excellent ten-doctor, but when I realized that Melody had really disappeared... I began trembling.