Very good. Really enjoyed the characterization and the idea. Nice job.

Interesting - on the 11th's farewell tour. I read half of this thinking it was from the 10th Doctor's POV, until I got to the point where they make eye contact and Rose doesn't recognize him right off the bat. I backtracked and reread it from 11th's POV and it certainly made a lot more sense. (In the back of my mind, I kept imagining Secret Diary of a Call Girl.) A good take on the Doctor-Rose relationship before her innocence was crushed by the realities of traveling with the Doctor.