I really liked how in character everyone in this fic was! Truly a rare thing to find. Some bits were clunky, for example I don’t think either Erza or Juvia would feel attracted to someone during a consoling hug? But that’s just my opinion. I have seen it a fair bit in anime tho.
That aside I really liked it! I rarely leave reviews but this was just SO IN CHARACTER that I had to tell you. Spectacular job.

It is very well written and I love it! 3

Where's the wedding? Hhh...XD
Nice fic. I love this. Thanks Author. Good bless u ;-)

Long live Grayza... lol

Wow... Finally Gray told her about his feeling. Awww... So damn cute. N now they are become couple already

Horay... Finally they are kissing even Gray didn't replied her T_T

Grayza go on the date... Yey... XD

Ok then... I'm ready to read the next chap lol

Aww... There was some Grayza moments here. So cute :-)

Ye

WTH! So... Jellal is still alive, right? Its ok. But i wish Grayza win over. Haha *evil laugh*

Why they didn't kiss at the show lol

Everyone are got mad here but it was so funny. Just loved them XD

This is so sad T_T
Btw, at the end of story the kids says someone name. It start from J. Is that means Jellal?

Nice _