Reviews for The Bitter Forces of Fate
sunflower2527 chapter 28 . 3/24/2019
I freaking love this storycome back and finish it please just want you to know there is still people reading ur story. hope u decide to continue it.
Charlene Clark chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
Great story please update
Charlene Clark chapter 28 . 4/9/2017
Great story please continue x
Tribalmum chapter 28 . 6/19/2014
I've just come by your story and read all 28 chapters over the last week and oh boy, what a ride! Wow this story really captured my imagination, had a total visual in my head and just fell in love with all the characters. Jenna is truly brilliant, totally believable, and loveable. Barsad the ultimate nice guy and of course Bane! Little bits that I loved were the smoke breaks (as a smoker I totally get that) and the fact that for once someone brought in some real elements such as laundry, and defusing underarms and legs etc...I've read so many stories and wondered about these little things that surely need to happen. It just so bought the story to life for me. I am sad to see that it's unfinished and that you may have lost your muse along the way...I do hope you get a chance to continue as your writing is amazing, intricate, descriptive, I could go on. I do love a good read and this one kept me distracted from the real world good and proper, lol xx
Flammeous chapter 28 . 5/15/2014
Oh please update soon!
batmanbane chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Great chapter! I'm so glad you've returned to this story. I'm sorry you lost your muse, but selfishly I hope you can finish the story, because I love it, and I hope Jenna and Bane can just forget everything and fall into bed with one another. :)
batmanbane chapter 28 . 4/29/2014
I'm so sorry you lost your muse, and endured other traumas in your life. You need reassurance that this is a great story, that we hang on your every word, and that we're pulling for you... :D :D

I think it's very ironic that Bane lies to Jenna about Rodger's death! Ha ha. How many times did Jenna lie to Bane in the past, driving him crazy and causing her endless trouble? Looks like the tables are turned, and Jenna might be in a position to confront Bane...

Update soon... you know you can do it! ;) ;) ;)
Rosemellen chapter 28 . 4/23/2014
I did enjoy it :) I hope everything gets better for you, and trust me, it's fine that you weren't able to update for so long with everything going on. I look forward to the next chapter!
Straight.to.the.Point chapter 28 . 4/23/2014
FINALLY! lol I almost cried when I saw you updated. I love this story with a freaking passion. Thank you for being an amazing writer. :)
rosesapphire16 chapter 28 . 4/23/2014
OMG! So glad to see you back and that your life is starting to get better! :) I enjoyed your chapter, and a nice ending to the first story.
CLTex chapter 28 . 4/23/2014
Nice to see this keep going..very happy for you in all your new situations!
rosesapphire16 chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Hey there! Just reading through the story again. I know you're going through some difficult stuff, I just wanted to tell you that you are a fantastic author and person! I look forward to reading more when you feel you have a great chapter :) I'll be a faithful reader :P
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
So... I've been checking for updates on this fanfic at least once a day since June 27, and even though I've given up all hope, I still do it. It's like a routine. I even deleted this story from my reading list, so that I would forget about it and not get disappointed every time I see that damn "updated: Jun 27 2013". Please, please, please, update! I noticed
ElGuapo867 chapter 27 . 12/2/2013
I read through this whole story. I can't tell you how many time I just wanted to choke out Jenna because she has to be one of the most annoying whiny characters I've ever read. And I read every word. Read through all of her stupid opinions and overly dramatic reactions to EVERYTHING. And its not even finished. This is bullshit.
Rosemellen chapter 27 . 11/21/2013
Oh come on! I was starting to get really interested I the story again, but noooooooooooooo, it's not finished yet. Dangit. On a happier note, I absolutely ADORE this story.
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