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Ersatz Einstein chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 You should fix the punctuation problems ("She knew that-Halloween meeting Christmas- that it wasn't meant to be"), but the tone is set well. |
GodlyJewel chapter 1 . 9/12/2012 Aww poor Sally. :'( I could see this being her thoughts as Jack takes off. |
Sam chapter 1 . 9/11/2012 Very well written. Please continue:3 |