Reviews for Dark Big
The Council of W chapter 13 . 3/15
beautiful work of art, deserves a place in the grand library of alexandria except if the library of alexandria didnt burn down and also if the work of art was a book and not a fanfiction on . would love to see an addon or addendum or epilogue later in the future, or perhaps maybe a sequal or movie to the story. finally, I would like to see a scene in which sonic and amy don't get interreputed if you know what I mean. p.s. next time, please add more information as to what happened with big and froggy. I was really curious about that part, and left somewhat... disappointed with a lack of intimate information as to the status of big and froggy. I was left on the edge of my seat and salivating for a climax to the novella, but these wishes were not fulfilled by the uncanny and frankly disappointing of this tale. on another, you failed to include your oc dehr within the disclaimer, leading me to believe that he was in fact not an oc at all. I know this is not the case given a swift google search, however, I am still disappointed by that part of the epic. all in all, however, I found this tale to be fuliflling and a religious experience, especially upon not only my vocal cords but also my ears and ears. beautiful story, I would rate it perhaps a 6 or 7 out of 7 chili dogs. thank you so much my dearest friend mr. xyzpet. I will never forget this, and I will never forget you.
Conner McGuire chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
A well-written piece for sure. The moment where Sonic eats the chili dogs - truly priceless. I can honestly say that this piece belongs among the greats and will be discussed by literary critics for years, decades, -centuries- to come.
mcain120 chapter 1 . 5/25/2018
A well-written piece for sure. The moment where Sonic eats the chili dogs - truly priceless. I can honestly say that this piece belongs among the greats and will be discussed by literary critics for years, decades, -centuries- to come.

Addendum
WHY THE HRECK CANT IT WAORK WHEN I POST IT? I WANNA BIG STACK OF SALAMI , and a big stack a bread, and shuffle them together like a deck card isnt that right mshraggy?
Your best buddie chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
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Dear Friend,
We really enjoyed the time we spent with you on Earth, but now that it's oll over goodbye. Luke keeps vomiting because of SHINNNNNJJJJJIIIIIIII the blood becomes water. Blood and Guts, Guts and Blood.
XOXOXOXOXo,
Your Best Buddie the WAter
Jennifer White chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
Bring more of CHARMY!
I can't wait to have time to read the next chap, I seriously find this random fic unbearably funny it's makes my ribs hurt, and I can't make a review properly I'm dying...
Gnat1 chapter 13 . 3/11/2013
NOOOOOO! Agh, it's so sad seeing this amazing fanfic end. On the other hand, I'm glad you completed it :) This is by far one of my favorite Sonic fanfics of all time. I loved Charmy, the prison suits, the double Espio/Charmy, Tails' tech obsession, Stop the Hedgehog (by far the best OC EVER!) and definately DARK BIG!

Excellent job my friend, keep it up!
Beyond An Anomaly chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
This was, by a mile, the most random Sonic story I've ever seen on this site...yet it was so random, it was pretty brilliant.

Well, obviously my favorite character and the funniest character was Charmy and was easily the best character portrayal of him possible. And I also liked Stop the Hedgehog. (Like Miles Prower, his name is a pun!) As for least favorite...I never like Amy in anything, but that's just me. That and how she kept yelling at Charmy made me think of her as, like what Slick the Wolf said in one of the reviews, a lunatic. Creepy? Nah. No one was that creepy. But Big, oh Big. Poor Big. Froggy was in the lake the ENTIRE TIME?! Seriously? Wow...guess that makes him IN character then for being too dumb to see that before.

"Was that sarcasm?" Amy asked.

"Would someone tell me what that is already!" Stop shouted.

"It's-" Amy started.

"Shadow." Knuckles stated.

So true. So, so true. Best line in this whole thing because of that.

Well, nice job, amigo. Hope you keep writing more hilarious stuff like this in the future; it was a lot of fun to read and I'm glad I decided to read it.

-BAA
Slick the Wolf chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
That's the end?
...couldn't you have added more to how Big found Froggy...
Lordoftheghostking28 chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
That was great!
...it's over now?! NOOOOO!
That was a great story! You should write more!
Beyond An Anomaly chapter 12 . 3/8/2013
Pun is infinite at Dark Big Enterprises meiji! Sorry. I had to...
Still loving it! And again, these puns are just too good. I'm still excited for another update and so happy you updated this story! :-)
Keep up the writing while I keep up the reading!
-BAA
Slick the Wolf chapter 12 . 3/8/2013
Amy's a lunatic...so it Charmy.
O_O
Lordoftheghostking28 chapter 12 . 3/8/2013
"Everybody look cool!"
That line just made my day.
Good job with the chapter! Keep em coming!
Jennifer White chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
fourth isn't it a quarter?

Hum, Amy should join.
Jennifer White chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Love the women bit and the part of the chief screaming like a girl, I'm still laughing.
Beyond An Anomaly chapter 11 . 2/18/2013
This is so random and spontaneous, it's a masterpiece. There's not much I can say after that. Charmy makes this entire thing...and of course he does! He's amazing!
I love this! Granted, there are some grammar mistakes here and there, but this is the funniest, most original thing I've read in a long while. Thanks for the laugh and PLEEEEEEASE update soon! :-)
-BAA
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