"My first sword teacher was actually a king from a fallen country."
I am cackling uncontrollably at how he told the exact truth there, in the presence of the person who taught him, and Arturia and Bedivere will likely BOTH never suspect the real answer. I love when people do stuff like that in stories.

I would love to see this expanded! I always enjoy Shirou/Archer in Medieval Britain stories, and truly don't think there's enough of them.

It's a pity you haven't been dropping more fic ideas here. These were pretty good.

Rather cleaner than what I expected of Alaya's intervention. Archer described it as basically being scorched earth tactics... although I suppose that if there are simply two targets and they can both be erased with such easy precision, then that would be quicker. It's not like Alaya actually cares about stopping the mud or fire that already got out. But he didn't do anything about the Greater Grail, which you'd think would be Alaya's target...

I don't know where the story would go if you continued it, to be honest.

Ooh, I'd have loved to see this become a story.
How did he copy Vortigern? Who used it? Will Kotomine find a new path in life now that he found someone who, rather than being the opposite of him, is perversely someone extremely similar?
God, seeing the fallout from these changes would have been amazing.
It's got to hurt, though, falling in love with Sakura then going back in time to when you can't love her like that anymore, even if it does let you save her in a way you otherwise never could.

Cool story.

Requesting Fate Gay/Night for the next entry feat. Shirou/Shinji/Issei yaoi threesomes while Rin fingerfucks herself and Luvia laughs at it all

:) quite nice.

Please continue this

4 amazing opeing plot, GOOD. more than 4 ears since last update, so no hope to get a 5th,BAD.

Hm, this is interesting as well. If you say is right about the fifth HGW will happen 10 years after canon, I wonder how things will turn out when Shirou and Rin are already matured, proper magus when they participate.

Ho... Now this is interesting idea as well... Looking forward to see the Fifth War of this version, where Gilgamesh ain't around, and how Shirou will develop into.

Wow, I really look forward for you to start working on this plot.

Kind of similar to Archer of Black and Fate in Time. Not a bad idea, though.

I wold really enjoy a fic like this