Oh, I love this! Too bad you never finished it! I bet it would have become even more interesting in later chapters!

Please continue this story. It is really quite interesting and funny.

damn.. I completely love this! I hope you could update more.. 3

love it

i wonder if these were hermiones rules, albus's, McGonagals or the ministries...

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I am really enjoying this Story! Thank you

Likeable. Keep smiling. :-)

The emoji bits are so cool that they're being left on the site, and that list is so very Hermione! Poor girl, going through that stress. Amazing work though!

What a lovely story, it makes me smile.

Little clocks... very nice! ; - ) !

Congrats! I'm so happy you are doing better! Also, this list was great!

I absolutely love this story! Hermione is definitely a character that would create random lists to sort out her thoughts during her years at Hogwarts. You did a really good job portraying Hermione's intelligence but keeping her still quite naive as preteen girls usually are. She is logical and smart, but still learning about innuendo, human nature, and complexities in the world. I also really liked that you threw in the little thoughts from Severus as he read along. It was a really good way to give little bits of information about their relationship, the alternate events of the books, and the personalities of the minor characters like her parents.

The only thing I have to say is that he set up of the last chapter with brackets didn't really work. Maybe use the same formatting from before and just keep the italics for the interactions between Severus and Hermione. Other than that one issue, I thought you did a terrific job.

I hope that you eventually finish it, despite the health issues. Crohn's disease is such a difficult diagnosis to handle since there is no cure and even the treatment of symptoms is hit or miss for each person. But you have a really great thing going here and I really do hope you continue.

This is a wonderfully done story of shorts, I also love how you've made Hermione a bit hormonal, which in turn makes all of her Canon emotions come out to place. Great work!

When you last reviewed my story and mentioned that you wrote, I checked your profile and remembered that I had loved this story. I'm not sure that it works as well with two people's thoughts going on, but I do like that they'd look at things together.

Did you mean to imply that Snape had sex with Ginny?