Jack and Angela, hmm?
With Jack being a soldier,
And Angela a doctor with an accent,
Sounds familiar...

I just found this story yesterday and it's amazing hoping to see more soon

This is great, can't wait for the next chapter

Ich liebe deine Vision.
Nicht nur weil Lucy zu den Assassinen gehört, sondern auch wegen Altair und Ezio.
Ich fand schon immer das Desmond und Lucy perfekt für einander waren.

Kann es kaum erwarten wann du weiter schreibst!

Bitte mach weiter so und schöne Grüße aus Deutschland

Google translation

I love your vision.
Not only because Lucy belongs to the Assassins, but also because of Altair and Ezio.
I've always thought that Desmond and Lucy were perfect for each other.

Can not wait for you to continue writing!

Please keep up the good work and best regards from Germany

"Many years from now, when thinking of this moment, neither of them would remember who started laughing first." DOES THAT MEAN THEY'LL BOTH LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER? Sorry. But please... xD
Such a great chapter, very sweet. They finally made it! As always I loved the banter! :3
Maybe you will update once or twice more this year? :P I look forward to it

Oh man, I totally forgot to review this chapter! I'm sorry!
Great chapter, I really look forward to their talk and hope they won't be interrupted once they find the time...
The banter betweem them is super cute, keep it up!

Thanks for still writing this it is wonderful to read thank you

Okay, that was adorable, but I was half hoping that as she turned away, Des would grab her wrist and kiss her anyway.
Anyway, great chapter, keep it up!

Nice chapterkeep up the good work

I just spent the past few days reading this story and it is amazing! I love how you changed the canon but still kept it the same. I really really like how Desmond went back to the farm after running away for a while and became an actual Assassin that way. I would love to see that moment of what caused Desmond to return and that moment that he actual does. That would be amazing to see. I also thought it was interesting that you had Desmond and Lucy know each other before their meeting at Abstergo. Anyways please update soon!

You need to alert the reader when this is in flashback.
So, Lucy is/was UNDER 21?
Still a virgin too?

Wait, how is Lucy not officially working for Abstergo?

Lucy is a poor liar. Maybe sticking a bit closer to the game lore would have been better.

I gotta wonder why names like "Buddha" or "Muhammad" are never used as cusswords.

Showing defiance is a bad idea; you don't tempt a shark in it's homewater.

After AC:B, they say that W.M. is really Vidic.

Desmond and Lucy give each other too much attention. Unless Vidic actually wants them to, that's too risky, it makes them, especially Desmond, look stupid.

Lucy wears PJs?

Speaking of "same cycle" reminds me why I had a fallout with AC franchise; at every ending, the Assassins are at the top, and the Templars are defeated. And then at the start of each sequel, the Assassins are once again at the brink of extinction, and the Templars are more powerful than ever.

I am confused, what happened to Lucy? That weird flashback...

AC1's emails confused me, as they made me think that there was "insider-killing" going on.

I remember when I first played; it was after seeing the awesome trailer to game 3. I believe in starting a story from the beginning, so I got the first 4 games as part of a discount set.
NONE of the trailers forewarned me of the modern-day backstory, so my first thought when starting 1 up was, WTF is this? Modern day? Where is the assassin?

Yay! You updated! I loved it, though I'm a little disappointed we didn't get to see a kiss! But I literally cheered when I read that badass Desmond moment! He'll be a better mentor of the Assassins when the time comes :p
I'd love to see another update whenever you have time!

Abstergo would simply allow Desmond to use the computer?

I like this so far.
A bit disappointed that Lucy seems to be still 100% loyal to the Assassins. I wanted to see the concept her love for Desmond battling her loyalty to the Templars.