You sure do understand orc culture.

So Baine doesn't die...
Yay!
I couldn't stand to see him die.

And yay!
Thrall/Go'el's warchief again!

Mak'gora is a duel-ish thing, right?
I'm having a terrible feeling that Baine dies.
Nooo.

Poor Thrall D
I can't bring myself to call him Go'el.
It doesn't feel right.

Alright..
I love your writing style.
It's smooth and easy to read.

I wish I had the talent of all you people who can write a good story.

You killed me.
Right there.
Not Garad-!

Is the Mok'Nathal Garrosh?
I bet it's Garrosh.

Nooo.

Wait...
Does this mean Tari used her other leg?

Knew Gren was Garrosh's son D

I feel soo bad for Tari.
Especially since she has a mother like Aggra.

Poor Tari D

Aggra is mean.
Verry mean.

Gren is Zaela's son, isn't he?
:o

For a moment I thought Thrall was the father.
Then I realized it was Garrosh.

I sort of feel bad for Yrokka.

Really great story and true to the characters as far as I have read. However, I think you need to update some of the finer points of what happened in Mists of Pandaria. One point of note is that Aggra makes it sound like Voljin is really dead, when you should say "Garrosh TRIED to have Vol'jin murdered in cold blood". Just a thought!

That this is a damn good story has already been said in the other reviews. All i have left to say is that they should hire you at blizz. You'd bring warcraft-story-writing to a new level.

Okay. You're a dang good writer. You have a very cinematic style with a brisk pace. You do a great job revealing your characters' thoughts and feelings by their actions, rather than getting bogged down trying to tell us what they feel, and you do the same bringing out your themes by the plot rather than talking about them directly. There are one or two missteps-the speed at which dinner at Stormstouts escalated into a public shouting match made me lean back and go 'okay, really?' for example, probably because all the context for the way Thrall and Aggara differ on trying to raise Tar'ash came afterwards, but on the whole the story is very involving, and very convincing. Good job so far.