Reviews for XOXO
lollipopberry chapter 5 . 7/13
Love this!

I almost couldn't go through reading The Breaking of InoShikaCho. It just hurt? Cause we know how it really ended.

And my favorite is Ice Cream (Or, Vanilla). This right here was top-tier story writing for me. It felt like reading a novel but in a short amount of time. Love that it almost made me think of Ino's character as a ManicPixie at the start, but her interactions and Shika's perspective of her beautifully fleshed her out as a character that has depth and not just tool for the story to progress. And I love Shika's character in this. They just complimented each other exceptionally well. I love their moments.
Your use of second-person pov just made the whole thing immersive and nostalgic.
I can only dream of writing like this. Great job! And thank you for writing this, I shed a tear at this.

Looking forward for more, hopefully!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/16/2017
So bright. So lovely and lively. Loved the last chapter! ️️️️
Just a Little Spark chapter 5 . 8/12/2015
This is aksjdoweifjoskdjfoiejw! :D (And I meant that in the best way possible.)

I just recently starting shipping ShikaIno (/literally/ recently, probably like three days ago or something) and I started wolfing down as many fics as I could. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. From Seduction all the way to Ice Cream. My favorite among the five so far is the wedding prompt; I'm such a sucker for weddings, and I like seeing this side of Ino and Shikamaru. So. Adorable.

And this one, too! I love love love your writing style in the last one. I rarely see any fics with this POV that don't sound... off. This was perfect.

I'm so glad I clicked on your story! I'm definitely checking out more of your stories as soon as possible. And I would reassure you that this is not the manic pixie dream girl stereotype, not at all. I'd be lying if I said the last few paragraphs kind of made me melt a little.

You're /so/ good at this. Daaaaayum.

Can't wait to hear more from you! :D
paosu chapter 4 . 7/4/2015
ohhhhh love, love, love. she is sooo hot.
I beg you: write lemon!
I cant wait to read more and ore. love you like shikaino and make this perfect stories.
Please continue!
paosu chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
ohhhhh I searched so long for an story about this topic. and I totally agree. I cant believe Kishi didnt think in this solution for Ino-Shika-Cho. they could have 2 children, a girl and then a boy and continue with the clans. whyyyyyyyyyy.
love your story. hope you continue. i will follow you!
paosu chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
OMG I love shikaino more and more thank to you.
beautiful, perfect. I need more and more
you have so many ideas that I loveeeeeee
paosu chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
uhhhhh. I found this and I cant wait to read it. so beautiful. she is so perfect, how Shika could say no to that woman! great story!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/30/2015
Very cute! Would love to read more :)
MommaMoka13 chapter 5 . 6/18/2015
They would habe made such a good couple. I feel like you captured them so well though!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/18/2015
That was one oc the most beatiful peace of work that i ever read u r soooo talented! And si is amaxing as always
Guest chapter 5 . 6/14/2015
Great story! I'm usually not the biggest fan of second person but I think you pulled it off really well. Way to keep them in character, and I liked your ending(s) a lot! You could even make spin offs based on any one of them ;)
TSI chapter 5 . 6/13/2015
That was a beautiful one-shot! It was unique, creative, and overall just really well put together. I'm glad you wanted to verr from the normal. u.u I especially loved the end and 'perhaps' that you used. Great writing!
Nebulous Paradigms chapter 4 . 4/27/2013
Experiment successful? I think so. Loved this. :)
nufze chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
i love them ! I love shikaino, more kissing scene maybe, dearly author? Hehe
nufze chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
haha, it was really cute to see how wise shika to ino...ah, please do update author-san
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